Spoken Word Poetry: Last Impression, By DDaggerDD

[DDaggerDD]

Last Impression

A ball of fire rises
From the depths... of the deep blue
the dull blue
making it a bolder blue
once again.
Shadows, figures, beings
wandering about, as the heat rises up
and brings out the true colours of life

The air is now showing its true blasphemy
it's beauty is now able to be seen

as something else

The viewer, the eyes, viewing past the heat
the inferno light, showing the truth, on one side, and the other;
now the shadows have realized the impressions
the first view...
never the same.

As the sun rises here, it sets in the next, unknowingly
by the shadows
not seeing past the impression

now just…

a last impression.

[DDaggerDD]

o_o wat

[Sidor]

o.o wtf is that?

[DDaggerDD]

o.o wtf is that?

a poem, o.o!

[Sidor]

I know lolz is it weird that I tried to change it and ended up raping?

[DDaggerDD]

I know lolz is it weird that I tried to change it and ended up raping?

i guess not, lol.

[Kitrine]

I know lolz is it weird that I tried to change it and ended up raping?

Kind of. It's also illegal.

[Infrequently]

Rofl .

[DDaggerDD]

Kind of. It's also illegal.

lol snap. Well i never thought of that, although this is just something i did just uhhh yea, it's nothing special. Ima make better ones soon.

[Sidor]

Kind of. It's also illegal.

Plagiarizing this *****'s poetry got me kicked out of Harvard. **** YOU DD.

[DDaggerDD]

Plagiarizing this *****'s poetry got me kicked out of Harvard. **** YOU DD.

wat. lol! no... o_o >=DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD u ?

[Chained]

Not bad
Pacing is a bit thrown off by the big words but not bad

[DDaggerDD]

Not bad
Pacing is a bit thrown off by the big words but not bad

lol thx. there is no particular pace thoe. its spoken word/free verse. so that means u can only hear it properly from me, not read it properly. altho i still tried with the line endings. idk if most ppl know that line endings = a pause lol. depends on poem for how long the pause is. but here the pauses are quite long. and the double space between stanza's = even longer pause o.o. sayin this for other ppl to see. should of put it in post idk.

[Sawaiz]

you suck at 2 things look at this

[Gemi]

lol wdf? xD