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Old 04-12-2008, 10:32 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Something i typed on a whim. I just sat up and said "I'll right a story today!"

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Heavy footfalls pervaded the silent hallways of Colour Haven, echoing through the peaceful setting. These steps belonged to a pair of guardsmen escorting, not kindly, a certain individual on an account of some crime.
Doors to some sort of judicial court came crashing open as these two guardsmen roughly shoved the certain individual in the middle of the colossal room. As guardsmen left, one of them looked back and mimed spitting on the floor beside the certain individual's feet.
As the individual brushed himself off, one could see that all of his apparel seemed to be some shade of green. Whether it be the light green cloak or the dark green trousers, one could say this man was obsessed with the color green. As he looked around the room, his bright green eyes pierced the darkness in an attempt to cut through its blackness.
Lights brightened from an unknown source. The darkness shrank back, revealing three high seats of Color: Red on the right, Yellow on the left, and Blue in the Center. In these seats sat the origins of all color, Lord Blue, Lady Red, and Lady Yellow. The three had unusually hard expressions and all of them were centered at the fourth occupant of the room.
Lord Blue sighed. "Mr. Green?" he queried. His voice was musical in all aspects.
"Yes, that is I," the man in question said. "How may I be of service today?" he added sarcastically, his deep voice rumbling in mirth.
"Today is no time for jest!" Lady Red shrilled.
"You will pay for what you did to my Dear Orange!" Lady Yellow shrieked.
"Now, now Lady Red, Lady Yellow," Lord Blue said quietly. "We have to ask him why he did this.
"Why did you murder Mr. Orange, Mr. Green?"
Mr. Green gazed at Lord Blue and said, "First off, I did not kill him. We were hunting together, trailing a young doe. When I sighted it, I turned to Mr. Orange and he was dead, his blood on the forest floor."
"Lies, LIES!" Lady Red cried.
"Kill him, KILL HIM!" Lady Yellow screamed.
Lord Blue calmed down the two hysterical women and turned to Mr. Green.
"And yet, the evidence points to you, Mr. Green. Mr. Orange's transmitter went down the instant you went near him. That is proof enough for the regular councils to decide."
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Old 04-12-2008, 10:35 AM   #17 (permalink)
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Like im adding a bit each time, so keep with the editing of my first post k?


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EDIT MARK I: Annnddd I'm ahead of the RPG wooo. I'm celebrating my little victory even though as soon as my story is finished the RPG will eat it and move on.
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Old 04-12-2008, 10:43 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Like im adding a bit each time, so keep with the editing of my first post k?


BTw the right was on purpose.
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I right stories all the time i do it alot.


EDIT MARK I: Annnddd I'm ahead of the RPG wooo. I'm celebrating my little victory even though as soon as my story is finished the RPG will eat it and move on.
Yeh write.
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Old 04-12-2008, 10:44 AM   #19 (permalink)
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Bump! Since Pirate Hunter just totally replied too all of the dead topics in the back and dark corners of the forum, i decided my recent story is still progressing and therefore NOT dead.
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Old 04-14-2008, 11:56 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Yeah I know, my Fiery Lotus is one bump away from being on the next page and forgotten forever. But I already bumped it yesterday, so I would feel stupid to bump again. That's what I get for working hard on it.
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