a story i wrote at school [not finished] - Page 3

**kickkcik** · 02-25-2008, 06:14 AM

i have now made an attachment i also changed the spellings a bit i hope you like it

**Nosedagger** · 02-25-2008, 06:15 AM

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Originally Posted by kickkcik

...WTF does that mean

Dictionary.com

**_Zephyre_** · 02-25-2008, 08:20 AM

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Originally Posted by kickkcik

i have now made an attachment i also changed the spellings a bit i hope you like it

Uploading it then removing it from that post so people have to view it after more effort doesn't really make it fail any less, even with the spelling fixes, unless you're trying to avoid having people view it. In that case, you shouldn't have posted it in the first place.

**Misuzu** · 02-25-2008, 05:29 PM

One thing I don't get is, why would you even mention GunZ if it's for school?

Senvae · 02-26-2008, 12:09 AM

LoL, all of a sudden the comments got all flammy. Look people, the kid is obviously not trying to win a Nobel prize with his writing here. He will get better with practice, he got his whole life ahead of him.

Ailysa · 02-26-2008, 01:20 AM

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Originally Posted by kickkcik

...WTF does that mean

LOL!

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Originally Posted by Senvae

LoL, all of a sudden the comments got all flammy. Look people, the kid is obviously not trying to win a Nobel prize with his writing here. He will get better with practice, he got his whole life ahead of him.

Well, when it was one to two sentences, everyone thought it was a joke and that's why we all laughed. But when he actually wrote more as if he were serious/trying, the story lost its effect and people started to take notice of its.... simplicity and use of very mediocre words.

EDIT: Also, stop necroing old threads, kickkcik.

**_Zephyre_** · 02-26-2008, 04:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Senvae

LoL, all of a sudden the comments got all flammy. Look people, the kid is obviously not trying to win a Nobel prize with his writing here. He will get better with practice, he got his whole life ahead of him.

Brutal honesty =/= Flaming

Besides, one of the things on my post-modhood to-do list is committing random asshattery.

Mad Hank · 02-26-2008, 03:30 PM

ZzZzZzZ

A+

Suicide plz and fix your grammar before you do =)

**kickkcik** · 02-26-2008, 06:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Mad Hank

ZzZzZzZ

A+

Suicide plz and fix your grammar before you do =)

why would i -.-

Sarcor · 02-26-2008, 07:31 PM

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Originally Posted by kickkcik

why would i -.-

cuz gunzfactor community people expect nothing less than ferpect.

Ailysa · 02-27-2008, 03:11 AM

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Originally Posted by Sarcor

cuz gunzfactor community people expect nothing less than ferpect.

haah you made a speliing mistkae!!!

lolool7loollol!

terence775 · 02-27-2008, 04:17 AM

England? I say, good sir, I can hardly believe my eyes!

Sarcor · 02-28-2008, 09:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Ailysa

haah you made a speliing mistkae!!!

lolool7loollol!

like you didn't!!!111111oneoneoneoneoneoneone
oneoneoneoneoneoneonetwo.

Ailysa · 02-28-2008, 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Sarcor

like you didn't!!!111111oneoneoneoneoneoneone
oneoneoneoneoneoneonetwo.

Haha> you hda a two aT teh end aNd incrroect grmmar! yOu sucks!!!!!11ONE-Hundred-And-Eleven,

Chess · 02-29-2008, 01:12 AM

^hahahaa

02-25-2008, 06:14 AM	#31 (permalink)
kickkcik Gunzfactorian Golden Gunzfactorian Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: S2-sheffield,england Posts: 108 kickkcik's GamerBio	Re: a story i wrote at school [not finished] i have now made an attachment i also changed the spellings a bit i hope you like it __________________ +rep me and i +rep you as soon as possible ^^

02-25-2008, 05:29 PM	#34 (permalink)
Misuzu Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ Golden Gunzfactorian Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: 天堂。 Posts: 5,668 Misuzu's GamerBio	Re: a story i wrote at school [not finished] One thing I don't get is, why would you even mention GunZ if it's for school?

02-26-2008, 12:09 AM	#35 (permalink)
Senvae Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Edmonton, Alberta Canada Posts: 433 Senvae's GamerBio	Re: a story i wrote at school [not finished] LoL, all of a sudden the comments got all flammy. Look people, the kid is obviously not trying to win a Nobel prize with his writing here. He will get better with practice, he got his whole life ahead of him. __________________ Fan Fiction by Senvae THE FIERY LOTUS Part-1, Part-2, Part-3, Part-4, Part-5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8 (Final Chapter) GTDRPG: Polichinelle

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Mad Hank Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: YOUSAYWHAAAT Skill: Noob Posts: 755 Mad Hank's GamerBio	Re: a story i wrote at school [not finished] ZzZzZzZ A+ Suicide plz and fix your grammar before you do =) __________________

02-27-2008, 04:17 AM	#42 (permalink)
terence775 Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: South Eastern Asia Posts: 732 terence775's GamerBio	Re: a story i wrote at school [not finished] England? I say, good sir, I can hardly believe my eyes! __________________ GTDRPG: Artrix GTDRPG: Layne