Like My GunZ Pictures

[Malinion]

they cant be traced because gunz picture 1 gun hand is to small and has an extra muscle compare. gunz picture 2 is rubbish so couldnt be and breasts too big and gunz picture 3 isnt ask my friend malcort.

[YARG!!!!]

you are the king at double posting lmao
nice drawings try to make something up yourself and keep at it until it looks like a good drawing thats what i do.

[Malinion]

i like to get my points across. i also post to each comment individualy

[ect301fps]

Originally Posted by uberlaxers

Draw . . Ummm. . . A girl lunging towards a . . . A pie.

^^^

This guy knows what he's talking about.

[(3)Hinata]

isee MAJOR multi-posting

[Malinion]

okay, thats nice but please, explain to me what that has to do with my drawings? I didn't ask people to comment on me multiposting. So what what does it matter to you. The majority of you said no because of it. Is that fair? did you even read what to vote for? did you look at my drawings? What is wrong with mult-posts anyway? I don't need to be told twice i've already explained if you bothered to read it. And i'm a steak & kidney myself (pie that is!)

[Junji]

Number 2 is good too - -

[Malinion]

thank you! i have improved number 2. i have changed the lips and added more tone to her and also you may have noticed her knuckles were out of line so i've edited them now too!

[Huopatossu]

Originally Posted by Malinion

they cant be traced because gunz picture 1 gun hand is to small and has an extra muscle compare. gunz picture 2 is rubbish so couldnt be and breasts too big and gunz picture 3 isnt ask my friend malcort.

Hence why they are badly traced. If you want to copy, at least make it well.

[Malinion]

i understand why now people don't talk to you now. Get over yourself. Have you got anything better to do than pounce around fan-art jeering at there attempts you wouldn't make a good art critic jeez you are so stubborn there not traced and if you trace something how do you change it? check for rubber marks. lol just you wait till i see your art. Change your tune your a bore. and spamming the thread is against the rules don't reply. your a waste of my time

[Paul]

It would make the artwork easier to judge if you would turn everything into it's proper position. Turning my head to the side like that irritates me, and makes viewing the art less enjoyable(I'm messing around, but it's true).

They're not too bad I suppose, but I dunno what you were drawing like before this so I can't say how much you've improved. Seeing as I have to break my neck to look at them for too long, I'm not going to go into a ton of detail but one thing I did notice is that the hair in the first drawing doesn't look quite right, more like some random scribbles than hair you tried to copy. Even in line form it should be a little more detailed than that. He also seems to have some sort of mutation on his elbow-pit. Like a giant tumor, or an extra muscle.

Anyway those were the things I noticed off the bat, other than your lines are extremely sloppy(I'm not talking about cleanable stuff, but the permanent lines), and you need to pay closer attention to detail. I'd have a few more goes at copying these images also before delving into photoshop painting. Learning to paint in photoshop is much easier when you're working with quality images. These ones probably aren't worth the effort right now(no offense intended).

[Malinion]

I've surgically removed all tumors, touched up lines and the hairs been edited. this is my 1st artwork post so, no previous artwork to compare with

[Paul]

Originally Posted by Malinion

im 13 for heavens sake im not going to be a matisse at my age and ive surgically removed all tumors, touched up lines and the hairs been edited. this is my 1st artwork post so, no previous artwork to compare with

If you don't like constructive criticism, do not post your artwork. I refuse to conform to the demand "Like My Gunz Pictures", so just take the advice and work with it, or do not and plateau at this level of skill. I didn't insult you, I just told you what I thought of it. It's nice work for an early drawing.

[That 1 Guy]

I have to agree with Paul, if you are planning to post your art work be ready for constructive criticism. Now not everyone here gave you constructive criticism, some were just being jerks, but you need to be able to take in the better comments and refine your art to become a better artist. Paul insulted you in no way, he was just trying to help.

[Malinion]

ok im sorry i did what you suggested and contemplated adding backgrounds should I paul? again i apoligise i was still annoyed with previous comments. I know the majority of you were just trying to help. Sorry

Post #2

Originally Posted by Paul

If you don't like constructive criticism, do not post your artwork. I refuse to conform to the demand "Like My Gunz Pictures", so just take the advice and work with it, or do not and plateau at this level of skill. I didn't insult you, I just told you what I thought of it. It's nice work for an early drawing.

lol i only just understood the joke i it was meant to be "Like My GunZ Pictures?" sorry P.S. Sorry about the multi-post.