Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat)

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:13 AM

At tonights work party im in a rap battle. I had been challenged last minute. I got 2 sentences so far. It is burning eachother. I need the help of GZF to help me think of some nice burning lines.

Heres what i got so far:

"Dont talk dont breeth your breath smells like ass, man go home take a shower or a long bubble bath"
"Seriously brush your teeth drink lots of scope and when you take a shower dont forget to use lots of soap"

HELP!!! AND GET GIFTED A HAT!!!

THANKS

Matt[CV] · 12-07-2007, 11:16 AM

"I will pwn yo arse 15-0 if you mess with sh1t anytime anyday."
"Town Castle. Prison or Dungeon ima give yo arse a beating"

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:19 AM

It has to rhyme and no any gunz stuff lol. Im rapping against someone. We have to burn eachother.

NICE LINES = NICE GIFTED HAT 4 U

Matt[CV] · 12-07-2007, 11:21 AM

I was joking, i do not consider myself a rapper in any way.

Gameking · 12-07-2007, 11:21 AM

Oh man you're ugly, it's devilish,
next time you say a word that'll be your dead, cappisch?

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:23 AM

..... ..... re-read that to yourself lol

Gameking · 12-07-2007, 11:24 AM

What? You have to start?

If he said some lines first that'll be ownage XD

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:25 AM

He says lines first than i say mine

2 Rounds
45 seconds each

HE GOES
I GO
HE GOES
I GO

Nayokia · 12-07-2007, 11:26 AM

The first lyrics suck and are pretty childish...

Divined · 12-07-2007, 11:38 AM

"Dont talk dont breeth your breath smells like ass, man go home take a shower or a long bubble bath"

"Seriously brush your teeth drink lots of scope and when you take a shower dont forget to use lots of soap"

" Listen , Im the motherfckin truth, never even been in the booth ,now ima tell you the truth , keep on talkin slick you gonna go poof , " ( Poof ,as in disappear )

Say the words right and it sounds ok.

10 seconds pm me later for more.

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Divined

"Dont talk dont breeth your breath smells like ass, man go home take a shower or a long bubble bath"

"Seriously brush your teeth drink lots of scope and when you take a shower dont forget to use lots of soap"

" Listen , Im the motherfckin truth, never even been in the booth ,now ima tell you the truth , keep on talkin slick and you gonna go poof , " ( Poof ,as in disappear )

Say the words right and it sounds ok.

10 seconds pm me later for more.

damn man its nice but the booth thing is wierd and your rhyming Truth>Booth>Truth
Re word that and you got yourself a hat!

WHO ELSE GOT SOME LINES FOR HATS?

semiiee · 12-07-2007, 11:46 AM

I Wan Hat

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by semiiee

I Wan Hat

You know how to earn one

semiiee · 12-07-2007, 11:49 AM

I Gotta Turn Black :for Hat

Hi Im Lil Jack · 12-07-2007, 11:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by semiiee

I Gotta Turn Black :for Hat

im white D: And im battling a black guy in rap battle. He freestyles.. and im self proparing lol ima get owned! and im scared to be rasict he will hurT me D:

12-07-2007, 11:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
Hi Im Lil Jack Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 29 Hi Im Lil Jack's GamerBio	Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) At tonights work party im in a rap battle. I had been challenged last minute. I got 2 sentences so far. It is burning eachother. I need the help of GZF to help me think of some nice burning lines. Heres what i got so far: "Dont talk dont breeth your breath smells like ass, man go home take a shower or a long bubble bath" "Seriously brush your teeth drink lots of scope and when you take a shower dont forget to use lots of soap" HELP!!! AND GET GIFTED A HAT!!! THANKS __________________ People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train.

12-07-2007, 11:16 AM	#2 (permalink)
Matt[CV] Gunzfactorian Postcount Demi-God Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: UK, Norfolk Posts: 8,340	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) "I will pwn yo arse 15-0 if you mess with sh1t anytime anyday." "Town Castle. Prison or Dungeon ima give yo arse a beating"

12-07-2007, 11:19 AM	#3 (permalink)
Hi Im Lil Jack Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 29 Hi Im Lil Jack's GamerBio	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) It has to rhyme and no any gunz stuff lol. Im rapping against someone. We have to burn eachother. NICE LINES = NICE GIFTED HAT 4 U __________________ People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train.

12-07-2007, 11:21 AM	#4 (permalink)
Matt[CV] Gunzfactorian Postcount Demi-God Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: UK, Norfolk Posts: 8,340	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) I was joking, i do not consider myself a rapper in any way.

12-07-2007, 11:21 AM	#5 (permalink)
Gameking Gunzfactorian Postcount Legend Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 6,857 Gameking's GamerBio	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) Oh man you're ugly, it's devilish, next time you say a word that'll be your dead, cappisch? __________________ G

12-07-2007, 11:23 AM	#6 (permalink)
Hi Im Lil Jack Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 29 Hi Im Lil Jack's GamerBio	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) ..... ..... re-read that to yourself lol __________________ People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train.

12-07-2007, 11:24 AM	#7 (permalink)
Gameking Gunzfactorian Postcount Legend Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 6,857 Gameking's GamerBio	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) What? You have to start? If he said some lines first that'll be ownage XD __________________ G

12-07-2007, 11:25 AM	#8 (permalink)
Hi Im Lil Jack Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 29 Hi Im Lil Jack's GamerBio	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) He says lines first than i say mine 2 Rounds 45 seconds each HE GOES I GO HE GOES I GO __________________ People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train, People round tha world, join hands, Start a love train, love train.

12-07-2007, 11:26 AM	#9 (permalink)
Nayokia Gunzfactorian Commando Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,522	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) The first lyrics suck and are pretty childish... __________________

12-07-2007, 11:38 AM	#10 (permalink)
Divined Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: New Jersey Posts: 410 Divined's GamerBio	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) "Dont talk dont breeth your breath smells like ass, man go home take a shower or a long bubble bath" "Seriously brush your teeth drink lots of scope and when you take a shower dont forget to use lots of soap" " Listen , Im the motherfckin truth, never even been in the booth ,now ima tell you the truth , keep on talkin slick you gonna go poof , " ( Poof ,as in disappear ) Say the words right and it sounds ok. 10 seconds pm me later for more. __________________ I got 300 gCoins in 1 week. Sign up under me and Ill help.

12-07-2007, 11:46 AM	#12 (permalink)
semiiee Gunzfactorian Commando Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Secret Azure Hideout[UK] Posts: 2,513	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) I Wan Hat __________________

12-07-2007, 11:49 AM	#14 (permalink)
semiiee Gunzfactorian Commando Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Secret Azure Hideout[UK] Posts: 2,513	Re: Need Help GzF Rappers (And Get A Hat) I Gotta Turn Black :for Hat __________________