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Old 03-08-2007, 11:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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k i sorta tried somethin new kinda this time.. i dun really like the render and might change it

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Old 03-09-2007, 12:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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v1 is better.

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Old 03-09-2007, 12:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Tiles effect aren't good.

And I suggest change style and not use the same colour again & again.

Text is hard to see. Too many hard-mixed & color dodge colours going on.

No depth in background.

You should put CC&C otherwise people will flame you, lawl.

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Tiles effect aren't good.

And I suggest change style and not use the same colour again & again.

Text is hard to see. Too many hard-mixed & color dodge colours going on.

No depth in background.

You should put CC&C otherwise people will flame you, lawl.

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i didnt even notice the text....and u listen to this guy ^
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Old 03-09-2007, 03:11 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i didnt even notice the text....and u listen to this guy ^
I agree.... the text is terrible, because you can't see it, v1 is better, but too bright, and you made the render way too small, make it a little bit bigger.
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Old 03-09-2007, 05:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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yeh i didnt spend too much time on the text... was in a hurry so i just slapped it on
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Old 03-10-2007, 12:23 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Ok, but still, make the render bigger. that small, makes it look bad O.o just a couple pixels bigger, then it will be aight.
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