My 3rd newest sig!

DevilTim811 · 03-23-2007, 06:27 PM

Here is my newest sig! its the 4th one i've done in my whole life but the 3rd one i did this year. Please rate it. Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

UPDATE

after recieving feedback from luge, i made an updated version. Please tell me which one u think is better.

or

ur comment would be greatly appreciated.

luge · 03-23-2007, 06:39 PM

OH GOD, dude, get rid of the boxes, wow, makes it look terrible.

DevilTim811 · 03-23-2007, 06:40 PM

u mean the grids?

luge · 03-23-2007, 07:34 PM

yes!, also, the blur on the render, not very good. Also blend it some, and do this.
Make a new layer, go to image > apply Image.
Then go to filter > blur > motion blur > then set it to overlay, duplicate that once, and then post it.

Ad4M l uK · 03-23-2007, 07:41 PM

3rd one is teh win.

kimjunsung · 03-23-2007, 07:55 PM

grids? there are not mosaic? if they are erase some parts of the sig and render... to burry

GunnerZeke · 03-23-2007, 08:27 PM

way too much motion blur... rather big too.... and like the other ppls said... the grids suck.......(not to be mean, but in a informative way

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kimjunsung · 03-23-2007, 08:29 PM

or did he Stylize>wind ?

DevilTim811 · 03-23-2007, 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kimjunsung

or did he Stylize>wind ?

I used wind then motion blur.

DevilTim811 · 03-23-2007, 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by luge

yes!, also, the blur on the render, not very good. Also blend it some, and do this.
Make a new layer, go to image > apply Image.
Then go to filter > blur > motion blur > then set it to overlay, duplicate that once, and then post it.

k i'll try doing that thx.,

DevilTim811 · 03-23-2007, 09:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by luge

yes!, also, the blur on the render, not very good. Also blend it some, and do this.
Make a new layer, go to image > apply Image.
Then go to filter > blur > motion blur > then set it to overlay, duplicate that once, and then post it.

Okay this is what I got...
Personally, i think its a bit too dark.

StarshipX · 03-23-2007, 11:31 PM

too much wind and too much blur
its over contrasted...

here's my solution to it
save as png>dupliacate layer>lower saturation>Overlay or whatever at 35% opacity or however much it looks good with

shade11 · 03-24-2007, 01:50 AM

The second version looks nice. Mainly because there aren't any grids on the stock image. But for god's sake, tone down the blur.

EDIT: Might be nice if you just toned down the blur a bit for the background, but completely remove all of the blur for your stock image.

Evil Angel · 03-24-2007, 04:25 AM

Ok, lose the wind. Try and blend a little (by erasing with a soft brush).
The blur seems absolutely pointless cause it leaves no focal point.
Use abit of brushing, maybe smudging. Use much smaller text, make the sig smaller in size too.

Radiant · 04-02-2007, 04:24 PM

third one looks ok.

03-23-2007, 06:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
DevilTim811 Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: My Little Mental Realm Posts: 70	My 3rd newest sig! Here is my newest sig! its the 4th one i've done in my whole life but the 3rd one i did this year. Please rate it. Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. UPDATE after recieving feedback from luge, i made an updated version. Please tell me which one u think is better. or or ur comment would be greatly appreciated. __________________ Last edited by DevilTim811; 03-23-2007 at 06:56 PM.

03-23-2007, 06:39 PM	#2 (permalink)
luge Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: ny Posts: 1,220	Re: My 3rd newest sig! OH GOD, dude, get rid of the boxes, wow, makes it look terrible. __________________ Click on the signature to join our forums. we currently have an arcade, an sotw, a laotf, we are setting up a "shop so you can change your name aswell and title.

03-23-2007, 06:40 PM	#3 (permalink)
DevilTim811 Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: My Little Mental Realm Posts: 70	Re: My 3rd newest sig! u mean the grids? __________________

03-23-2007, 07:34 PM	#4 (permalink)
luge Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: ny Posts: 1,220	Re: My 3rd newest sig! yes!, also, the blur on the render, not very good. Also blend it some, and do this. Make a new layer, go to image > apply Image. Then go to filter > blur > motion blur > then set it to overlay, duplicate that once, and then post it. __________________ Click on the signature to join our forums. we currently have an arcade, an sotw, a laotf, we are setting up a "shop so you can change your name aswell and title.

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kimjunsung Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: DEATHDESIGN Posts: 9,999 Posts: 742 kimjunsung's GamerBio	Re: My 3rd newest sig! or did he Stylize>wind ? __________________ haha. im back.

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shade11 Gunzfactorian Commando Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: 127.0.0.1 Naggering: No Posts: 2,343 shade11's GamerBio	Re: My 3rd newest sig! The second version looks nice. Mainly because there aren't any grids on the stock image. But for god's sake, tone down the blur. EDIT: Might be nice if you just toned down the blur a bit for the background, but completely remove all of the blur for your stock image. __________________ phandentium's workshop Words . . .and text too! Last edited by shade11; 03-24-2007 at 03:48 AM.

03-24-2007, 04:25 AM	#14 (permalink)
Evil Angel Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Above you. Posts: 1,246	Re: My 3rd newest sig! Ok, lose the wind. Try and blend a little (by erasing with a soft brush). The blur seems absolutely pointless cause it leaves no focal point. Use abit of brushing, maybe smudging. Use much smaller text, make the sig smaller in size too. __________________

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