Make this better

StarshipX · 02-24-2007, 11:49 AM

ehh what to do to make ths better

zoliax · 02-24-2007, 12:35 PM

Background is a bit plain = change it.
Good blending but bad render look, kinda squashed up looking = change it.
Add some things i.e. Text
Make smaller, hate tall sigs
Hmm, can't think of more lol.
GL

Ian H. · 02-24-2007, 12:38 PM

Bottom one- Feathers need a bit more blending imo. I don't like how dark the edges are of 'em.

ghost bane · 02-24-2007, 01:11 PM

you need some ligthing mabe a little more texture for lighting either go to gradient map or levels layers>new adjustment layer> and pick either one

StarshipX · 02-24-2007, 01:23 PM

wtf level layers? new adjustment layers? wtf is that

ghost bane · 02-24-2007, 03:13 PM

do u use photoshop?

luge · 02-24-2007, 04:53 PM

On the one your not using, I would lighten the render a bit, because all you see is the make out of the render, nothing else though.

Admiral HML · 02-26-2007, 10:27 AM

Open a new document.

Cheerful · 02-26-2007, 08:23 PM

^+rep Sir

No offense but I wouldve started a new doc already.

Always color/linear dodge first. Add a C4D if u like and use more filters. Its too plain

Admiral HML · 02-26-2007, 08:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Cheerful

^+rep Sir

No offense but I wouldve started a new doc already.

Always color/linear dodge first. Add a C4D if u like and use more filters. Its too plain

I'm a girl. But that's for the rep. D:

StarshipX · 02-26-2007, 09:31 PM

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Originally Posted by ghost bane

do u use photoshop?

yesyes i use photoshop its old but its photoshot nonetheless (photoshop 4.0)

and wtf linear dodge?
wast dat?
i dun got any c4d and like some filters whatever they are but no photofilters
i got a few effects and thatts it

Admiral HML · 02-27-2007, 07:54 AM

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Originally Posted by StarshipX

yesyes i use photoshop its old but its photoshot nonetheless (photoshop 4.0)

and wtf linear dodge?
wast dat?
i dun got any c4d and like some filters whatever they are but no photofilters
i got a few effects and thatts it

Do us all a favor, and just quit while you're ahead.

StarshipX · 02-27-2007, 08:28 PM

yeh yeh i know i sux but i can still try.... why do u think im at gunzfactor and not a real GFX forum

besides..... this is jsut a hobby....

A_Korean · 02-27-2007, 08:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Tempo

Do us all a favor, and just quit while you're ahead.

That's not nice.

Ignore her, she does that sometimes xP

Well, i would try to help you, but i need the PSD file so i can edit it. The first thing i would do = Make it smaller.

Admiral HML · 02-27-2007, 09:05 PM

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Originally Posted by A_Korean

That's not nice.

Ignore her, she does that sometimes xP

Well, i would try to help you, but i need the PSD file so i can edit it. The first thing i would do = Make it smaller.

Sometimes? xD

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Cheerful Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Knew Yurk Citee Posts: 940 Cheerful's GamerBio	Re: Make this better ^+rep Sir No offense but I wouldve started a new doc already. Always color/linear dodge first. Add a C4D if u like and use more filters. Its too plain

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