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Old 02-24-2007, 11:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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ehh what to do to make ths better
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Old 02-24-2007, 12:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Background is a bit plain = change it.
Good blending but bad render look, kinda squashed up looking = change it.
Add some things i.e. Text
Make smaller, hate tall sigs
Hmm, can't think of more lol.
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Old 02-24-2007, 12:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Bottom one- Feathers need a bit more blending imo. I don't like how dark the edges are of 'em.
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Old 02-24-2007, 01:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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you need some ligthing mabe a little more texture for lighting either go to gradient map or levels layers>new adjustment layer> and pick either one
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Old 02-24-2007, 01:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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wtf level layers? new adjustment layers? wtf is that
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Old 02-24-2007, 03:13 PM   #6 (permalink)
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do u use photoshop?
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Old 02-24-2007, 04:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Default Re: Make this better

On the one your not using, I would lighten the render a bit, because all you see is the make out of the render, nothing else though.
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Old 02-26-2007, 10:27 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Open a new document.
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Old 02-26-2007, 08:23 PM   #9 (permalink)
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^+rep Sir

No offense but I wouldve started a new doc already.

Always color/linear dodge first. Add a C4D if u like and use more filters. Its too plain
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No offense but I wouldve started a new doc already.

Always color/linear dodge first. Add a C4D if u like and use more filters. Its too plain
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do u use photoshop?
yesyes i use photoshop its old but its photoshot nonetheless (photoshop 4.0)


and wtf linear dodge?
wast dat?
i dun got any c4d and like some filters whatever they are but no photofilters
i got a few effects and thatts it
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yesyes i use photoshop its old but its photoshot nonetheless (photoshop 4.0)


and wtf linear dodge?
wast dat?
i dun got any c4d and like some filters whatever they are but no photofilters
i got a few effects and thatts it
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Old 02-27-2007, 08:28 PM   #13 (permalink)
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yeh yeh i know i sux but i can still try.... why do u think im at gunzfactor and not a real GFX forum

besides..... this is jsut a hobby....
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That's not nice.

Ignore her, she does that sometimes xP

Well, i would try to help you, but i need the PSD file so i can edit it. The first thing i would do = Make it smaller.
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Ignore her, she does that sometimes xP

Well, i would try to help you, but i need the PSD file so i can edit it. The first thing i would do = Make it smaller.
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