Final Fantasy GunZ - The Empire of Mo_Hawk - Episode 1

[Rufinito]

YouTube - Final Fantasy GunZ - The Empire of Mo_Hawk - Episode 1

Enjoy.

First time I do a vid with so much content in it. I hope it's not too bad.

It's pretty much a laugh at various FF characters/storylines set in GunZ

EDIT: TY for rep people

[castitatis]

Well, not to be mean, but kinda lacking a few things.
For one, the storyline was worse then the one in ff1 on nes.
Second, voice was really annoying >.> Sorry if it was you doing it, but it sounded choppy and just didn't fit. Stick to text only, thats what most ff did and it was fine.
There are some transitions missing, I mean that image sequence soemtimes jump from one to the other with nothing in between.

I'd say 6/10, you might have some improvement to do on this, but its pretty fine so far.

[Rufinito]

Your comments are good.
But for the storyline. Nothing can be worse than FF1. It just says. You are heros. You save crystals. K bye.
-.-''

EDIT: Some people in ijji forums are really retarded.

WTF LOL. I stopped watching it after I heard the music. :|

[castitatis]

Do not go on ijji forums. The general iq of it is below that of a chipmunk, just being there slowly rots your braincells.

Your storyline is basically: you are heros, enter villains, kill villains.

[Rufinito]

Well, most of them are being OK, other than a child telling me I shoulnd't have used FF music in an FF GunZ movie. DURR.

I'll try to make the storyline better next episode.

[Seriatim]

it would have been better if the voices were a little louder and didnt sound like it was recorded on a webcam microphone ><

use adobe audible :P or Sony Vegas.

and it really sounded like it was being text read, not actual emotions.

[Rufinito]

All right, I'll keep that in mind next episode!

EDIT: Castatis, I quoted you in ijji forums.
^_^

[Seriatim]

btw, i think you did a really good job. ^^

[Rufinito]

Thank you. It did take FOREVER to edit
;_;

[bok choi]

Originally Posted by castitatis

Well, not to be mean, but kinda lacking a few things.
For one, the storyline was worse then the one in ff1 on nes.
Second, voice was really annoying >.> Sorry if it was you doing it, but it sounded choppy and just didn't fit. Stick to text only, thats what most ff did and it was fine.
There are some transitions missing, I mean that image sequence soemtimes jump from one to the other with nothing in between.

I'd say 6/10, you might have some improvement to do on this, but its pretty fine so far.

i agree and ive seen better but u still did a good job and what i think you need to add is like different atcks and not just slash and dmg points above their heads like 8000,1993 or sumtin like go slide dnace in their face to cause dmg or do summons u shouldnt just slash and u shouldnt just make the atk so fast like slash dash back shoot slash also u should make a little curso and menu on the bottom for battle and make it say ur choice of atk
but nice job 7/10

[NinjaNed]

I liked the movie alot. Lol good job and keep it up.

[Rufinito]

Alright. So stuff to improve for next episode
1) Improve Storyline
2) Add more varied attacks
3) Add DMG
4) Add MP
5) Add Summons
6) Better voice acting.

If anybody wants to help, contact me.

[castitatis]

omg you quoted me on ijji forum >_<
I feel my iq droping just thinking about my thoughts being around there....

[Mo Hawk]

Mo Hawk <3s this movie but does not know why...
o yeah cause it has the best actor in it ME!!!
it was all me!!!
this movie is nothing with out me!!!
and rufi and paige and akraiken and nine and su and everyone else who helped RUFI who was the number 1 work horse of this movie.

[Rufinito]

-cries of joy-

I'M A WORK HORSE? YAY?

^-^ For people who were wondering how I made it. xD



My editing program has two video layers AND sound layers. Thats how.