MY VERY 1st GUNZ MOVIE (SUX)

[system366]

Ok... so here is my very 1st GunZ movie, i dont thinks its really that good but oh well... i posted it here because i dint know hwo to put it on the fan work movie page thing so yeh... my clan website is located at :

Http://www.freewebs.com/systemoveride366/index.htm

you can rate and comment my movie there on the Movies page

ot the link straight to my movie on Yahoo video is here :

Crazy women kills Uber - Noober - Yahoo! Video

[Daisuke]

i wtf'd at the music

[system366]

Originally Posted by Daisuke_Kage

i wtf'd at the music

Ahahahaha! yeh the music rules 0.o Gota love da real slim santa song XD i didnt relli knwo what to put and i thought since its my 1st movie i can piss about with it a bit so i just threw in some funny parodies

but... basicly did you like it or did you not like it?

I want every 1s opinion as its my 1st movie can critisize all you want i just want to get better give me advice if you will and tlel me the good n bad parts... btw, i know the red is hard to read at the start thats not my fault it worked fine on my comp... thats because when uploaded to Yahoo video server the quality is actually decreased a bit so yeh... i wont be using red again XD the coloures at start was just for a lil test :P

Also there is a poll at the top of this post... please use it would be well apreciated along with comments, thank you all

[SoulEpsilon]

#1 remove the black bars if you don't need them etc, 80% of your movie isn't fighting, so no need for the black bars press T or H to remove them while in a replay viewing

#2 One thing that really kind of made my eyes get sore and bored was when you use the free glide mode you kind of used it through the whole thing which is fine just watch the replay 3-4 times before actually recording then see where you should be recording it from using free mode, it makes it better in the end =)

thats all I seen in it that i'd like to say but so far for your first movie you've done pretty well good job.

[system366]

Originally Posted by SoulEpsilon

#1 remove the black bars if you don't need them etc, 80% of your movie isn't fighting, so no need for the black bars press T or H to remove them while in a replay viewing

#2 One thing that really kind of made my eyes get sore and bored was when you use the free glide mode you kind of used it through the whole thing which is fine just watch the replay 3-4 times before actually recording then see where you should be recording it from using free mode, it makes it better in the end =)

thats all I seen in it that i'd like to say but so far for your first movie you've done pretty well good job.

Woooooooo! yey, ty ^_^

Ah yeh, the bars i will remove in my next vid, i was gunna in that 1 but in several places i hadnt left myself enough time atthe start to be pushing all te buttons and get to the place for recording :P so ima do it a bit differant in my next vid... thanks for te comment n advice ^_^

[Partywookiee]

ska ftw

which band is this? oO

[SoulEpsilon]

Yeah, check out some of the tutorials, they have here for windows movie maker if your using that at least, they were helpfull for me, also check out my movie xD, Novas Film #2 its in these forums a lil below
ty.

[Yvgeniy]

Eh... this isn't very good at all. I barely sat through a minute of that before I turned it off, no offense.

Just a few things to mention that could improve your future productions... Hit H to get rid of the HUD and the black bars before you record.

Use some camera angles... Most of what I saw was free cam following the characters and while this is fine in some instances it got boring very quickly. You want to keep people's attention on what's going on, not show somebody running for a whole minute while you follow them with the free cam. As a result your movie is long and boring.

Anyway... don't use different color for the subtitles each time. First of all, this is annoying; second of all, it doesn't look professional; and third of all, it's hard to read. The same thing applies to transitions. You consantly used a different one for the hell of using a different one each time. While those transitions may look kind've cool they're not always appropriate, and certainly not approriate when you have so many. Remember, the most common video transition is a cut, so that's what you should stick with for the most part.

Don't swear. It isn't that you can't swear in a movie, but there is a difference between mindless swearing for no particular reason (perhaps to be funny) and the swearing of a particular character with a particular mind set, etc. All that swearing does to your film is make it look more unprofessional and immature.

Lastly... it seemed like you used the music that you used simply because you liked it. That's not how you make your music choices when you're dealing with a movie. It has to be appropriate to the scene and flow with whatever is going on.

Overall it looks like you put a lot of stuff in for the sake of it looking cool and variety. You use different colors for the typically "black screen," and you do things along those lines with just about everything else (music, subtitles, angle transitions, etc). While you have all these things available to you doesn't mean that you have to use them all, in fact, using them all makes your production look that much worse. What you have to learn to do is be selective, meaning, be able to make the right choices for the right situations.

Good luck in your future films.

[carlzilla]

daayum.. i dont even WANT to watch it judging by al lthese bad comments -_- and the title with SUX in () >.> soo no thx

[system366]

Originally Posted by Yvgeniy

Eh... this isn't very good at all. I barely sat through a minute of that before I turned it off, no offense.

Just a few things to mention that could improve your future productions... Hit H to get rid of the HUD and the black bars before you record.

Use some camera angles... Most of what I saw was free cam following the characters and while this is fine in some instances it got boring very quickly. You want to keep people's attention on what's going on, not show somebody running for a whole minute while you follow them with the free cam. As a result your movie is long and boring.

Anyway... don't use different color for the subtitles each time. First of all, this is annoying; second of all, it doesn't look professional; and third of all, it's hard to read. The same thing applies to transitions. You consantly used a different one for the hell of using a different one each time. While those transitions may look kind've cool they're not always appropriate, and certainly not approriate when you have so many. Remember, the most common video transition is a cut, so that's what you should stick with for the most part.

Don't swear. It isn't that you can't swear in a movie, but there is a difference between mindless swearing for no particular reason (perhaps to be funny) and the swearing of a particular character with a particular mind set, etc. All that swearing does to your film is make it look more unprofessional and immature.

Lastly... it seemed like you used the music that you used simply because you liked it. That's not how you make your music choices when you're dealing with a movie. It has to be appropriate to the scene and flow with whatever is going on.

Overall it looks like you put a lot of stuff in for the sake of it looking cool and variety. You use different colors for the typically "black screen," and you do things along those lines with just about everything else (music, subtitles, angle transitions, etc). While you have all these things available to you doesn't mean that you have to use them all, in fact, using them all makes your production look that much worse. What you have to learn to do is be selective, meaning, be able to make the right choices for the right situations.

Good luck in your future films.

Yeh um, thx for the tips... -.-

Az i said... its a test i was playing with the coloures at the start... i didnt use a diff coloure for each one just the 1st 4/5 the rest wer all white...

Also as i posted earlyer i will be getting rid of the black bars...

I also stated the fact that since it was my 1st movie i would have a play with the music dint relli know what to put in this one so just threw some funny songs in

[pahoto]

Wow... At least post something decent... This got very annoying and I guess you're right, it does suck. Waste of 17 minutes.

Rating: 2/10 (Do Better)

[®age]

I exited after like the first minute.

[Radi]

i liked the initial concept [though executed poorly].
Stopped watching it at the second song.

Invision Yv's post here --->

[Stumpeh]

sry i just voted the last one cuz im so hilarious