KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie

KenzoDude · 02-15-2007, 01:47 PM

Hey guys!

This is my first movie that i made with GunZ, i hope you will enjoy watching this movie i have made.

Its only 6 Minutes long nd i hope it doesnt bore you!

plz leave all comments on this forum as i prefer to see them here rather than on youtube, thx ever so much.

here is the link and enjoy!

YouTube - GunZ - The Wind Up Mission

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Movie Form:

Movie Name: The Wind Up Mission
Size:About 30mb
Duration: 6:01
Video Size: Unknown

Link:YouTube - GunZ - The Wind Up Mission

Summary: Basically, where his commander/mate plays a prank on his best soldier and basically, it gets really funny and its a must see!

EDIT: I might be putting up a downloadable version of this aswell, but thats not official yet!

Symbolick · 02-15-2007, 04:01 PM

lol funny lol i like it.
( nice bg music

)

KenzoDude · 02-15-2007, 06:13 PM

BTW, im hoping to make another movie called

"The Battle of the Town"

Time of Release: Unknown

but it will be better than my movie posted on this thread, much better, cos this movie is a little bad.

l8rs

pahoto · 02-15-2007, 08:02 PM

To be honest, it was really crappy. Not saying it's bad, I'm just saying it needs better qualities. For example:

1.Control the camera angle.
2.Stop switching weapons alot.
3.Take of HP and AP black bars.
4.Good music but use ones that matches.
5.Mutiple taunting.
6.Stop with the cursing, it doesn't always make things seem cool.

The only thing I saw that was good were the subtitles. Just make'em a little smaller next time if you don't mind. And if you are going to make another one, please make it decent so I can watch the whole intere thing.

Rating: 5.5/10 (Didn't Care Much)

**Paul** · 02-15-2007, 08:10 PM

Good job on your first try. I'd just make a few suggestions though. If you'll notice, in actual movies, the camera does not just float around the characters the whole time. They usually switch camera angles a lot in order to show different locations and stuff like that. Moving the camera around so much makes it look pretty bad.

I'd work on your storyline, because it was intriguing at first, but then we find out that nothing much actually happens. He just walks around. Nothing new there. I also suggest you tone down the swearing in your dialogue. Basically, anything that isn't censored on Gunzfactor can be in a film, but anything beyond that is taking it a bit too far. It really does make the film seem a bit immature, because it takes a particular character to swear in the fashion yours did, but since there wasn't much character development in the first place, we just see a moron cursing like a..moron. Lol.

Anyway, good job on your first film, it's still much better than some first tries. I wish you luck on your new film.

KenzoDude · 02-16-2007, 05:26 AM

yeh s'pose i did need alot of work.

the following i have taken into consideration -

1 - Less Cursing, Can get stupid after a while
2 - Stop jigging the camera
3 - Come up with a better storyline
4 - Take off meaningless items
5 - Stop switching weapons
6 - ETC ETC ETC LOL

dnt worry, i will hopefully make a better one next time, thx!

Symbolick · 02-16-2007, 05:42 PM

Can i put an idea in? Like more actions and killing?

02-15-2007, 01:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
KenzoDude Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Birmingham, England Posts: 60 KenzoDude's GamerBio	KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie Hey guys! This is my first movie that i made with GunZ, i hope you will enjoy watching this movie i have made. Its only 6 Minutes long nd i hope it doesnt bore you! plz leave all comments on this forum as i prefer to see them here rather than on youtube, thx ever so much. here is the link and enjoy! YouTube - GunZ - The Wind Up Mission ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Movie Form: Movie Name: The Wind Up Mission Size:About 30mb Duration: 6:01 Video Size: Unknown Link:YouTube - GunZ - The Wind Up Mission Summary: Basically, where his commander/mate plays a prank on his best soldier and basically, it gets really funny and its a must see! EDIT: I might be putting up a downloadable version of this aswell, but thats not official yet! Last edited by KenzoDude; 02-15-2007 at 05:45 PM. Reason: Additional Information

02-15-2007, 04:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
Symbolick Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 23 Symbolick's GamerBio	Re: KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie lol funny lol i like it. ( nice bg music ) __________________ [url=http://profile.xfire.com/rayjoon] [IMG]http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7435/funny****ke7.png[/IMG]

02-15-2007, 06:13 PM	#3 (permalink)
KenzoDude Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Birmingham, England Posts: 60 KenzoDude's GamerBio	Re: KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie BTW, im hoping to make another movie called "The Battle of the Town" Time of Release: Unknown but it will be better than my movie posted on this thread, much better, cos this movie is a little bad. l8rs

02-15-2007, 08:02 PM	#4 (permalink)
pahoto Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Killeen, Texas Posts: 392 pahoto's GamerBio	Re: KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie To be honest, it was really crappy. Not saying it's bad, I'm just saying it needs better qualities. For example: 1.Control the camera angle. 2.Stop switching weapons alot. 3.Take of HP and AP black bars. 4.Good music but use ones that matches. 5.Mutiple taunting. 6.Stop with the cursing, it doesn't always make things seem cool. The only thing I saw that was good were the subtitles. Just make'em a little smaller next time if you don't mind. And if you are going to make another one, please make it decent so I can watch the whole intere thing. Rating: 5.5/10 (Didn't Care Much) __________________ I have no signature at the moment =P

02-15-2007, 08:10 PM	#5 (permalink)
Paul The One and Only Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Pennsylvania. Posts: 2,264 Paul's GamerBio	Re: KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie Good job on your first try. I'd just make a few suggestions though. If you'll notice, in actual movies, the camera does not just float around the characters the whole time. They usually switch camera angles a lot in order to show different locations and stuff like that. Moving the camera around so much makes it look pretty bad. I'd work on your storyline, because it was intriguing at first, but then we find out that nothing much actually happens. He just walks around. Nothing new there. I also suggest you tone down the swearing in your dialogue. Basically, anything that isn't censored on Gunzfactor can be in a film, but anything beyond that is taking it a bit too far. It really does make the film seem a bit immature, because it takes a particular character to swear in the fashion yours did, but since there wasn't much character development in the first place, we just see a moron cursing like a..moron. Lol. Anyway, good job on your first film, it's still much better than some first tries. I wish you luck on your new film. __________________

02-16-2007, 05:26 AM	#6 (permalink)
KenzoDude Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Birmingham, England Posts: 60 KenzoDude's GamerBio	Re: KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie yeh s'pose i did need alot of work. the following i have taken into consideration - 1 - Less Cursing, Can get stupid after a while 2 - Stop jigging the camera 3 - Come up with a better storyline 4 - Take off meaningless items 5 - Stop switching weapons 6 - ETC ETC ETC LOL dnt worry, i will hopefully make a better one next time, thx!

02-16-2007, 05:42 PM	#7 (permalink)
Symbolick Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 23 Symbolick's GamerBio	Re: KenzoDude's - Wind Up Mission Movie Can i put an idea in? Like more actions and killing? __________________ [url=http://profile.xfire.com/rayjoon] [IMG]http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7435/funny****ke7.png[/IMG]