Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview)

koreanbabe · 02-13-2007, 10:42 AM

Here is a preview of my new movie
Zakuro Road Of Blood
Its 2 minutes 51 seconds
Producers are Video J.N.D. & D.F.S.
Director is Sawyer/Kor3anBab3
Story idea by Cuurma
Hope you like the preview
Enjoy watching!

Click & Watch

Rose · 02-13-2007, 11:31 AM

i like it.
cool music.
but sometimes u cant see the subtitles.

koreanbabe · 02-13-2007, 11:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Dea†h™Rose

i like it.
cool music.
but sometimes u cant see the subtitles.

Yeah I know full movie will not be uploaded on youtube but in file to download and there will be voice acting

Moron · 02-13-2007, 12:39 PM

that was pretty cool, good luck on movie.

carlzilla · 02-13-2007, 01:54 PM

2/5 sum of the subbys were blerd out and there was a sub that saud "thx i "own" you one" >.>????
story didnt really make sense... hes stabdibg there sime dood atts him he kills they talk about dan chi blaah wdf?also fights were to long.
over all 2/5 =P

koreanbabe · 02-13-2007, 02:33 PM

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Originally Posted by carlzilla

2/5 sum of the subbys were blerd out and there was a sub that saud "thx i "own" you one" >.>????
story didnt really make sense... hes stabdibg there sime dood atts him he kills they talk about dan chi blaah wdf?also fights were to long.
over all 2/5 =P

OMG its preview not storyline its scene 1 of the storyline omg
READ PPL!

**Yvgeniy** · 02-13-2007, 03:20 PM

From what I've seen so far this doesn't look very impressive. You don't use camera angles all that much (most are first person view) and that just makes me feel like I'm watching a game. Which, I mean, it's a game, but when it comes to movies you want it to look cinematic, rather than like a frag video (AKA: gameplay).

From what I've seen of the storyline so far I'd say that it has some potential, but if you want to continue in the direction you were going then you shouldn't have your characters say stuff like "noob" or "wtf," because then it just looks like an amateur production that wasn't taken seriously. Needless to say it goes back to the whole game aspect mentioned previously. Overall you might want to fix some of the dialogue and some events so they make a little more sense (unless of course it was by design, which so far it doesn't look like it).

The subtitle issue was already mentioned. That's about all, I think.

koreanbabe · 02-13-2007, 03:31 PM

Its preview thats why camera angels arent in yet
got some nice camera angels for further movie
release will be arround arpil / may 2007
And about storyline ppl told me (they who have read the script) that i should make it with real people but dont got budget for effects and other stuff lol

Euh subtitels arent done its just to let ppl see a part of it
The original script will be added after the voice acting
I will use effects never seen in a gunz movie before and i'm trying to do my best to let every1 remember this movie
What i want to get:
-ppl like the storyline
-a geat game movie

**Paul** · 02-13-2007, 03:46 PM

Storyline seems alright. You still need camera angles though. Doesn't matter if it's a preview or not. Often times a preview is supposed to include some of the best that the thing being advertised has to offer. Thus the reason to make a preview in the first place; to appeal to your audience and get them ready, so that people slowly discover the preview, and then all rush to see your film since they liked the preview so much. If you don't at least use camera angles in your preview, then it is pointless.

I'd suggest re-filming the parts where your used the chase cam, and also make those subtitles a lot clearer. Work on your dialogue a bit too.

Van Halen is awesome. xD

Anyway, good luck with your film.

koreanbabe · 02-13-2007, 04:07 PM

Thx well deuh ofcourse is van halen good 1 OF THE BEST!!!!

Its allready refilmed =D
But thx for tips

Tetsuo · 02-13-2007, 04:25 PM

too mny people upload to crappy youtube, google video uploads faster and is better quality... see the common sense in that ?

Raynu · 02-13-2007, 04:30 PM

Wow This Is Really Good Stuff Nice Music And Great Timgin, 9/10!

koreanbabe · 02-14-2007, 11:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Ss-You

too mny people upload to crappy youtube, google video uploads faster and is better quality... see the common sense in that ?

No Oo

I only upload trailers/previews there and its video google not google video ;.)

02-13-2007, 10:42 AM	#1 (permalink)
koreanbabe Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 16 koreanbabe's GamerBio	Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) Here is a preview of my new movie Zakuro Road Of Blood Its 2 minutes 51 seconds Producers are Video J.N.D. & D.F.S. Director is Sawyer/Kor3anBab3 Story idea by Cuurma Hope you like the preview Enjoy watching! Click & Watch

02-13-2007, 11:31 AM	#2 (permalink)
Rose Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Goddess of Flashstep. Posts: 1,780 Rose's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) i like it. cool music. but sometimes u cant see the subtitles. __________________ 10$ Ijji card in 30mins. NO JOKE http://www.freeprizesite.com Last edited by Rose; 02-13-2007 at 11:34 AM.

02-13-2007, 12:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
Moron Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 255 Moron's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) that was pretty cool, good luck on movie. __________________ Saddam - Curse Blimp - Curse Moron - Curse

02-13-2007, 01:54 PM	#5 (permalink)
carlzilla Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Ohio Posts: 645	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) 2/5 sum of the subbys were blerd out and there was a sub that saud "thx i "own" you one" >.>???? story didnt really make sense... hes stabdibg there sime dood atts him he kills they talk about dan chi blaah wdf?also fights were to long. over all 2/5 =P

02-13-2007, 03:20 PM	#7 (permalink)
Yvgeniy Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 2,975 Yvgeniy's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) From what I've seen so far this doesn't look very impressive. You don't use camera angles all that much (most are first person view) and that just makes me feel like I'm watching a game. Which, I mean, it's a game, but when it comes to movies you want it to look cinematic, rather than like a frag video (AKA: gameplay). From what I've seen of the storyline so far I'd say that it has some potential, but if you want to continue in the direction you were going then you shouldn't have your characters say stuff like "noob" or "wtf," because then it just looks like an amateur production that wasn't taken seriously. Needless to say it goes back to the whole game aspect mentioned previously. Overall you might want to fix some of the dialogue and some events so they make a little more sense (unless of course it was by design, which so far it doesn't look like it). The subtitle issue was already mentioned. That's about all, I think. __________________ www.sakstudios.net

02-13-2007, 03:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
koreanbabe Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 16 koreanbabe's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) Its preview thats why camera angels arent in yet got some nice camera angels for further movie release will be arround arpil / may 2007 And about storyline ppl told me (they who have read the script) that i should make it with real people but dont got budget for effects and other stuff lol Euh subtitels arent done its just to let ppl see a part of it The original script will be added after the voice acting I will use effects never seen in a gunz movie before and i'm trying to do my best to let every1 remember this movie What i want to get: -ppl like the storyline -a geat game movie Last edited by koreanbabe; 02-13-2007 at 03:37 PM.

02-13-2007, 03:46 PM	#9 (permalink)
Paul The One and Only Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Pennsylvania. Posts: 2,264 Paul's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) Storyline seems alright. You still need camera angles though. Doesn't matter if it's a preview or not. Often times a preview is supposed to include some of the best that the thing being advertised has to offer. Thus the reason to make a preview in the first place; to appeal to your audience and get them ready, so that people slowly discover the preview, and then all rush to see your film since they liked the preview so much. If you don't at least use camera angles in your preview, then it is pointless. I'd suggest re-filming the parts where your used the chase cam, and also make those subtitles a lot clearer. Work on your dialogue a bit too. Van Halen is awesome. xD Anyway, good luck with your film. __________________

02-13-2007, 04:07 PM	#10 (permalink)
koreanbabe Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 16 koreanbabe's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) Thx well deuh ofcourse is van halen good 1 OF THE BEST!!!! Its allready refilmed =D But thx for tips

02-13-2007, 04:25 PM	#11 (permalink)
Tetsuo Gunzfactorian Commando Join Date: May 2006 Location: Natsumi's Side Posts: 2,563 Tetsuo's GamerBio	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) too mny people upload to crappy youtube, google video uploads faster and is better quality... see the common sense in that ? __________________ Givin Gunz another go, feel free too gift pmeds to Tetsuoo x]. Cruels Highest Streak - 146

02-13-2007, 04:30 PM	#12 (permalink)
Raynu Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The clouds오후오. Posts: 89	Re: Zakuro : Road Of Blood (Preview) Wow This Is Really Good Stuff Nice Music And Great Timgin, 9/10! __________________ Always looking up. Did you know Toshiharu and Kumanthe1 are best mates. Did you know Bureda abuses Black Hurricane. Did you know King banana sings to Cherly once a day. Did you know Argument eats out DiaZ. Did you know Anja can drink Jaz2005 under the table. Did you know Flupty and Moo-cow-moo hold hands. Did you know Heiden took a bite out of Killalsandwich Did you know JinDaYi force fed Wratts CumZ. Did you know Wr@ithlord cried when Maxx ate his steak.