trailer for my new vid

[Mutative]

Im making a vid for a friend. This is part of it, i'd like to get some tips of what to do to make it better

YouTube - Mutate Trailer

[Divine Rose]

So far it's really good <3

Since you wanted tips:

- The intro was good, but the actual clip that's happening is a little bland, add a little more comps/FX
- The rain is a good effect but it's lacking, add the sound effects for it (you could probably rip it free from some cheap website), and I can help you make it a little more realistic if you want, just pm :3
- When you render, check the box that says Stretch to fill resolution or whatever, it'll get rid of the small black-age at the sides of your video
- The actual text (Mutate) is a little hard to read.

Other than that, it's looking really good mayng <3

[619Destiny]

Not bad, I like the rain.
Kind of hard to see you have to look up close at the screen, but not bad.

[Inunitsa]

lol i played with u yesterday

[Frostie]

The first clip is boring ass hell other then that its good.

[capo]

Originally Posted by Divine Rose

So far it's really good <3

Since you wanted tips:

- The intro was good, but the actual clip that's happening is a little bland, add a little more comps/FX
- The rain is a good effect but it's lacking, add the sound effects for it (you could probably rip it free from some cheap website), and I can help you make it a little more realistic if you want, just pm :3
- When you render, check the box that says Stretch to fill resolution or whatever, it'll get rid of the small black-age at the sides of your video
- The actual text (Mutate) is a little hard to read.

Other than that, it's looking really good mayng <3

True, And you can get the sounds from

FindSounds - Search the Web for Sounds



Other then that what you said, Text was hard to read, Probably the way he rendered, Or something.

-Ph4nt0m

[poykey]

Ok you want criticism so here is some : You shouldn't have all the same map for so long, you want variety to keep the viewer interested and I personally don't like the rain effect but your movie so your choice. And steal roxin's song much? lol. Maybe you didn't know though o.o.

[Mutative]

Originally Posted by poykey

Ok you want criticism so here is some : You shouldn't have all the same map for so long, you want variety to keep the viewer interested and I personally don't like the rain effect but your movie so your choice. And steal roxin's song much? lol. Maybe you didn't know though o.o.

roxin didnt use that song//

[poykey]

Originally Posted by Mutative

roxin didnt use that song//

UpToPixelation.wmv - FileFront.com

[Hot§hot]

pretty good i want a map that it raining xD

[Mutative]

Originally Posted by poykey

UpToPixelation.wmv - FileFront.com

Cool

am i supposed to care?