[GunZ Trailer Contest] + Addicted

[okan]

My 2nd trailer for the contest

please give me feedback

its like my 3rd movie with Sony vegas T_T


ew that clip at 2:00 is 8bit config on ill render it new and upload it aggain

YouTube - [GunZ Trailer Contest] + Addicted + Ultega

[Yakuza Kuzumi]

i don't like it there are spelling mistakes the music don't go well there was no real syncing seemed more like a frag movie didn't show much variety.

the shotgun sounds overpower the whole movie

[SleepyFan]

-u spelt against wrong
-did not have the ijji video at the start (they would hate u for this because it's basically not advertising for them)
-the rectangular cutouts i found had no theme / purpose to it

- i like the font and its colour

[okan]

Originally Posted by SleepyFan

-u spelt against wrong
-did not have the ijji video at the start (they would hate u for this because it's basically not advertising for them)
-the rectangular cutouts i found had no theme / purpose to it

- i like the font and its colour

thanks, i will overwork it

[SleepyFan]

oh ya

-from 30 seconds
-the light effect doesn't look natural due
a) u rotated ur character
b) and the fact that the light did not keep its prospective, but rather stayed at the side of the screen; thus making it look not natural

-just might want to make the light keep its position relative to the character not the screen itself; keyframes are ur friends

[okan]

Originally Posted by SleepyFan

oh ya

-from 30 seconds
-the light effect doesn't look natural due
a) u rotated ur character
b) and the fact that the light did not keep its prospective, but rather stayed at the side of the screen; thus making it look not natural

-just might want to make the light keep its position relative to the character not the screen itself; keyframes are ur friends

it was my 1st try with particle illusion

[shotay2]

Sleepy, ijji never said this trailer thing was for their own gunz trailer D: I think everyone just assumed it 'cause ijji's trailer sucks so bad xD