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| Member | Hi there, seeing as how this project was a bit of a disaster, i decided to share with you all what i have done so far with the footage i have recorded so far, nd that i hope you will enjoy it, and perhaps help me with my gunz movie career in my spare times thanks! Movie Name: GunZ: The Ransom Size: 21.6 MB Duration: 5:00 Resolution: Link: GunZTheRansomUnfinished_Ke.wmv - FileFront.com - High Quality YouTube - GunZ The Ransom Incomplete Movie - Low Quality Summary: The daughter of a leading arms supplier owner, Melinda, gets kidnapped and for what? REVENGE! Therefore, this is considered as an act of terrorism by the government and the GEA anti-terrorist team is sent on a mission to bring her back safely, and that this movie involves a good plot with plenty of action to keep you interested enough! Last edited by KenzoDude; 08-15-2007 at 09:49 AM. |
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| Gunzfactorian | hmm kenzo i could help u dun worry ur already on my xfire so ill just contact u later so u can finish ur moveh kk? and it was pretty good just make the talk scenes slower cuz i could barely read the whole line without it changing so fast... |
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| Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Oct 2006
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![]() ![]() | Eh writing this as I watch. You should have made a sound for *clicks gun* instead of saying it. The font could be better (at the beginning of the movie and subtitles) $100000000 seems like quite a lot... "possible breachable" sounds really gey.... reinforced titanium, why does it need to be reinforced? Titanium is really expensive and I doubt it would be used in a fence or gate or wall or w/e Why is the guy just staring at the car... How did the guy staring at the car know that "any point along the reinforced titanium wall" is breachable... And why is the mansion "old" I think that's a typical stereotype that they always bring the kidnapped person to the "old" mansion, why not a new one. BTW if they have "rockets" why do they have to search for a way in... You used "breach" too much. Overall it has a good storyline. The plot is sort of basic (as of now) but I also think not have cooperative members isnt really an excuse. Also it looks like (to me) that you're just making a movie to gain "fame" but I think you should make a movie for the fun to watch and share it. Also there are always new actors, and you will always have the uncooperativ eactor problem. |
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