The Story of the Swordsman of Legend part one

God-King Sonblade · 02-16-2006, 07:33 PM

The Tale of Sonblade, Chapter 0(Prolouge) - Chapter 1(Death)
This is the beginning of the tragic tale of Sonblade and his personal vegence.

The story begins in a small town in Astra named Olden Town. Nicole Armeth had just given birth to her son, Greg Armeth. As a child, he gained the nickname of Sonblade because of his expertise with all blade weapons. He trained himself in many different styles of swordsmanship. By the age of 14, he had recieved knightship from the king. At age 15 he was sent to the highest class school in the country, which was an all-girls school. Although disliked at first, staff and students quickly began to like him.

At age 17, he and another student were banished for undisclosed reasons. While returing home, he saw smoke in the sky. He quickly ran home only to find it razed by goblins. He took a large wooden paddle and slayed ever single goblin. Scared and bruised, he confronted the goblin commander. Towering over Sonblade, the brute tried to flatten Sonblade. Sonblade agilily dodged and came upon a corpse with a sword. He took the sword and ran at the commander. He jumped off the beast's gut and dashed. Sonblade impaled the commander in the forehead, silencing the beast. Sonblade then searched the town looking for his mother and father. A few minutes later, he came upon his house. A strange man was in there. He addressed Sonblade and seemed well educated.
"You are the cause of this raid, are you not?" Said Sonblade
"Why would a military general cause a ruckus like this?" Said the man
Realizing that the man was actually in the military, he saluted the man
"You do not need to do that," said the general, amused
The General then handed Sonblade a letter addressed to him.
"What is this?" said Sonblade
"A letter from the King, asking for you to join the army,"Saidd the general.
Sonblade opened the letter, and sure enough, it was asking for him to join the army. With nothing less to lose, he unwilling accepted.
"One last question. Where are my parents!" Screamed Sonblade.
"You need not worry, they escaped safely." Said the general.
All that Sonblade knew about the attack on Olden Town was that it was staged and he was being watched the whole time.

Chapter 1-Death
"Son, wake up you lazy ass!" exclamed Karrie.
"What the fu....Oh sorry..." Said Sonblade, tiredly
Sonblade got out of bed and kissed his girlfriend. He could smell bacon from his room. He rose from his bed and headed straight to the kitchen.

"MMMMmmmmm bacon..." Said Sonblade, hungry
"I made it sorta quick since we are both leaving early today.Sorry" Said Karrie

They both ate then went to their room. They both got changed, Karrie in her doctor clothes, and Sonblade his chainmail and suit.
"Where the hell is it!" Yelled Karrie.
Sonblade gave her her pin that said: Dr_Ash MD.
"I still don't see how it is pronounced Ass and not Ash...." Said Sonblade
"Oh, shut up!" Exclamed Karrie

The both of them looked at the clock and ran out the door, tripping over each other and landing in an "akward" position. They both blushed and went thier seprate ways. Sonblade headed to the military base to rally his troops and set out to Rasen City for thier next assignment. The group left and opened the town gates. It was a two day walk, and it was uneventful. Upon arriving in Rasen City, a snowstorm had started. The men ran to the base to get out of the cold. Sonblade said that they will wait out the cold. That night, all of Sonblade's troops got drunk off their asses...
"OMGIMONFIRE!!!!" exclaimed one of the troops while on fire. Sonblade threw a barrel of water on him. The barrel shattered and that was the that. They all slept in seprate rooms, and something felt odd in Sonblade's room. When he was sleeping, he would here his name in a soft voice. One time Sonblade woke up. He looked at the window and saw a figure that quickly dissappeared. He thought that he was just seeing things.

The next morning the troops set out. When they reached the city gates, a strange man was standing there. Sonblade told the man to move but he would not even budge. Sonblade observed the man's clothing to see what he looked like for a military report for the man to be arrested. Sonblade saw that the man was wearing what seemed to be a serverly damaged Pampoa Companion Shirt.
"SIR MOVE OR YOU WILL BE ARRESTED!" Yelled Sonblade.
"Don't look behind you, dogs of the military," The man said in a decreped voice. There was a loud explosion behind them. All of Sonblade's troops turned and saw that the explosion came from the base! Sonblade did not turn but saw the man pull out a sword. Sonblade unsheathed his speed sword and entered a battle stance. The man dashed past Sonblade so fast, that Sonblade was spun around to see the upcoming horror. In only a split second, the man had cut through all of Sonblade's troops. Sonblade looked in awe and horror at the site.
"No, this cannot be!" Sonblade said
Sonblade then ran at the man and removed his head. Sonblade then when to his fallen troops and buried them. Upon his return to the battle site, Sonblade saw the man's body. He walked past it to observe the severed head.
"IMPOSSIBLE THAT IS..!" His words were cut off as a sword impaled his chest. Bleeding profusely, Sonblade looks down. He sees that his speed sword is what is inside him! With the last of his life, Sonblade turns around. A headless man has just stabbed him. Shocked, Sonblade soon faints. As he regains some consiouness, he sees the headless man walk up to one of the graves he made. Like an elastic monster, the man's arm shoots down into the grave and pulls up the corpse holding it by its neck. The body falls, and the neck is bubbling with a green substance. The headless man then takes the head and places it on the stump that his head should be. Sonblade then dies...

Epilouge of Chapter 1: One year later, Location: Graveyard of Heroes, Sonblade's Grave
Karrie is weeping and holding a small baby, infront of Sonblade's Grave. She lays down a rose upon the tomb. She walks away carrying the baby. The child starts to cry and Karrie hears a scratching noise coming from the tomb. As she turns around, the grave explodes, throwing dirt everywhere. Through the dust, Karrie sees a glowing figure elevated above the ground. She sees that it is Sonblade!
"Greg!" She yells, as the figure descends to the ground.
She can see that his body has barely changed, except for one thing; He has wings that are charred and evil-looking. Sonblade walks up to Karrie.
"I am sorry, but I need to finish my deed to the world," Said Sonblade. He starts to float again, and then flys away. Scared and confused, she remembers a story her mother once told her: "When the Hero of Astra is killed, this person shall return as the Angel of Death." Now realizing that what her mother said is true, she no longer has confusion, but instead more fear that Sonblade might bring death to Astra...

To Be Continued

aDaMz92 · 02-17-2006, 03:55 AM

Beacause I'm nice, I'll say 8/10. xD

Azeroth · 02-18-2006, 04:49 AM

I haven't read it, but I do not approve of using your name as the main character. That's pointed at half the people who have written fics, not just you, so don't feel too bad.

God-King Sonblade · 02-18-2006, 12:01 PM

Errr...This is a story about MY character, so it should use his name and likeness in any format....

02-16-2006, 07:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
God-King Sonblade Gunzfactorian Postcount Legend Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Outside your window Posts: 6,529 God-King Sonblade's GamerBio	The Story of the Swordsman of Legend part one The Tale of Sonblade, Chapter 0(Prolouge) - Chapter 1(Death) This is the beginning of the tragic tale of Sonblade and his personal vegence. The story begins in a small town in Astra named Olden Town. Nicole Armeth had just given birth to her son, Greg Armeth. As a child, he gained the nickname of Sonblade because of his expertise with all blade weapons. He trained himself in many different styles of swordsmanship. By the age of 14, he had recieved knightship from the king. At age 15 he was sent to the highest class school in the country, which was an all-girls school. Although disliked at first, staff and students quickly began to like him. At age 17, he and another student were banished for undisclosed reasons. While returing home, he saw smoke in the sky. He quickly ran home only to find it razed by goblins. He took a large wooden paddle and slayed ever single goblin. Scared and bruised, he confronted the goblin commander. Towering over Sonblade, the brute tried to flatten Sonblade. Sonblade agilily dodged and came upon a corpse with a sword. He took the sword and ran at the commander. He jumped off the beast's gut and dashed. Sonblade impaled the commander in the forehead, silencing the beast. Sonblade then searched the town looking for his mother and father. A few minutes later, he came upon his house. A strange man was in there. He addressed Sonblade and seemed well educated. "You are the cause of this raid, are you not?" Said Sonblade "Why would a military general cause a ruckus like this?" Said the man Realizing that the man was actually in the military, he saluted the man "You do not need to do that," said the general, amused The General then handed Sonblade a letter addressed to him. "What is this?" said Sonblade "A letter from the King, asking for you to join the army,"Saidd the general. Sonblade opened the letter, and sure enough, it was asking for him to join the army. With nothing less to lose, he unwilling accepted. "One last question. Where are my parents!" Screamed Sonblade. "You need not worry, they escaped safely." Said the general. All that Sonblade knew about the attack on Olden Town was that it was staged and he was being watched the whole time. Chapter 1-Death "Son, wake up you lazy ass!" exclamed Karrie. "What the fu....Oh sorry..." Said Sonblade, tiredly Sonblade got out of bed and kissed his girlfriend. He could smell bacon from his room. He rose from his bed and headed straight to the kitchen. "MMMMmmmmm bacon..." Said Sonblade, hungry "I made it sorta quick since we are both leaving early today.Sorry" Said Karrie They both ate then went to their room. They both got changed, Karrie in her doctor clothes, and Sonblade his chainmail and suit. "Where the hell is it!" Yelled Karrie. Sonblade gave her her pin that said: Dr_Ash MD. "I still don't see how it is pronounced Ass and not Ash...." Said Sonblade "Oh, shut up!" Exclamed Karrie The both of them looked at the clock and ran out the door, tripping over each other and landing in an "akward" position. They both blushed and went thier seprate ways. Sonblade headed to the military base to rally his troops and set out to Rasen City for thier next assignment. The group left and opened the town gates. It was a two day walk, and it was uneventful. Upon arriving in Rasen City, a snowstorm had started. The men ran to the base to get out of the cold. Sonblade said that they will wait out the cold. That night, all of Sonblade's troops got drunk off their asses... "OMGIMONFIRE!!!!" exclaimed one of the troops while on fire. Sonblade threw a barrel of water on him. The barrel shattered and that was the that. They all slept in seprate rooms, and something felt odd in Sonblade's room. When he was sleeping, he would here his name in a soft voice. One time Sonblade woke up. He looked at the window and saw a figure that quickly dissappeared. He thought that he was just seeing things. The next morning the troops set out. When they reached the city gates, a strange man was standing there. Sonblade told the man to move but he would not even budge. Sonblade observed the man's clothing to see what he looked like for a military report for the man to be arrested. Sonblade saw that the man was wearing what seemed to be a serverly damaged Pampoa Companion Shirt. "SIR MOVE OR YOU WILL BE ARRESTED!" Yelled Sonblade. "Don't look behind you, dogs of the military," The man said in a decreped voice. There was a loud explosion behind them. All of Sonblade's troops turned and saw that the explosion came from the base! Sonblade did not turn but saw the man pull out a sword. Sonblade unsheathed his speed sword and entered a battle stance. The man dashed past Sonblade so fast, that Sonblade was spun around to see the upcoming horror. In only a split second, the man had cut through all of Sonblade's troops. Sonblade looked in awe and horror at the site. "No, this cannot be!" Sonblade said Sonblade then ran at the man and removed his head. Sonblade then when to his fallen troops and buried them. Upon his return to the battle site, Sonblade saw the man's body. He walked past it to observe the severed head. "IMPOSSIBLE THAT IS..!" His words were cut off as a sword impaled his chest. Bleeding profusely, Sonblade looks down. He sees that his speed sword is what is inside him! With the last of his life, Sonblade turns around. A headless man has just stabbed him. Shocked, Sonblade soon faints. As he regains some consiouness, he sees the headless man walk up to one of the graves he made. Like an elastic monster, the man's arm shoots down into the grave and pulls up the corpse holding it by its neck. The body falls, and the neck is bubbling with a green substance. The headless man then takes the head and places it on the stump that his head should be. Sonblade then dies... Epilouge of Chapter 1: One year later, Location: Graveyard of Heroes, Sonblade's Grave Karrie is weeping and holding a small baby, infront of Sonblade's Grave. She lays down a rose upon the tomb. She walks away carrying the baby. The child starts to cry and Karrie hears a scratching noise coming from the tomb. As she turns around, the grave explodes, throwing dirt everywhere. Through the dust, Karrie sees a glowing figure elevated above the ground. She sees that it is Sonblade! "Greg!" She yells, as the figure descends to the ground. She can see that his body has barely changed, except for one thing; He has wings that are charred and evil-looking. Sonblade walks up to Karrie. "I am sorry, but I need to finish my deed to the world," Said Sonblade. He starts to float again, and then flys away. Scared and confused, she remembers a story her mother once told her: "When the Hero of Astra is killed, this person shall return as the Angel of Death." Now realizing that what her mother said is true, she no longer has confusion, but instead more fear that Sonblade might bring death to Astra... To Be Continued

02-17-2006, 03:55 AM	#2 (permalink)
aDaMz92 Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 53	Re: The Story of the Swordsman of Legend part one Beacause I'm nice, I'll say 8/10. xD __________________ IGunz: aDaMz92 Lv.14 [Dual Shotguns] (Equally Main) Snowy_Gal Lv.14 [Shotgun + Random] (Equally Main) JGunz: SnOwY Lv.12 [Shotgun + Rocket] (Main) Ecthelion Lv.9 [Shotgun + Random]

02-18-2006, 12:01 PM	#4 (permalink)
God-King Sonblade Gunzfactorian Postcount Legend Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Outside your window Posts: 6,529 God-King Sonblade's GamerBio	Re: The Story of the Swordsman of Legend part one Errr...This is a story about MY character, so it should use his name and likeness in any format....