Arya: Road of Blood (Part1)

Sukoshi · 04-01-2008, 09:02 AM

Its my first fan fiction, sorry for bad english. This was supposed to be a gunz movie but i didn't feel like casting and stuff so i edited the script and made a fan fiction =)

Arya: Road of

Blood

Created by Sukoshi

The world was ripped a part and the clove between riche and poor became even bigger. The once who hold the money hold the power . Together those men formed a city called Axium and locked it from the world that once was called the most beautiful place in the galaxy, earth. Now its destroyed by the wars between Axium and Travia. Travia were the poor men, they were the only one who saw the real meaning of creating Axium…
The war between the rules and the rebels was so heavy, the world payed the price and was left in ashes. Manny wars were battled, no matter how many proud and strong fighters Travia brought, the Axium weapons where to power full… However after Axium was build the true meaning of the project were clear to everyone inside but it was to late the big gates where locked and guards protecting them day and night, nobody would come in but nobody would leave Axium either. 12 Years later from the first war, Sawyer a professor that was forced to work for Axium in developing weapons to give the Axium soldiers more fire-power. Had picked up his life again and met Ziza, married her and they have 2 daughters, Aurelia and Arya. It was a normal school day Aurelia and Arya were learning, while Sawyer and Ziza were eating in the dinning room. Suddenly someone knocked the door. Ziza looked at Sawyer with a terrifying look, stood up and went to the door. Sawyer was still sitting at table he was shaking and scared. When Ziza opened the door there was the sound of a voice saying “times up” and then a loud but deadly gun shot. Sawyer stood up took a table knife and runned to the door. Just when he turned around the corner he severed the same faith as his wife. Two life’s taken but for what reason? A third person joined the other 2 and said “Nice work, men. Get the kid and bring her to me. Aurelia and Arya who heard the gun shots didn’t understand anything. Aurelia started running Arya was trying to keep up but she wasn’t fast enough, her sister was older. When Aurelia entered the hall the 2 men where already there, they shot Aurelia several times, she felt on her knees and turned her head to Arya who was some seconds behind, she said the word “Run” silence. Arya was in shock her legs couldn’t move, she was shocked and didn’t understand anything of what happened. After a couple of seconds she got back to the reality and actually runned behind a book closet with tears in her eyes but she know if she would cry the persons who killed her sister would come after her and they would kill her to. Aurelia wasn’t dead yet, the 2 men smashed her body against the wall and put a knife on her throat. A loud voice said “Wait, I know that you know why we are her so tell me were she is and maybe I let you be my little pet. Aurelia looked in the eyes of the men, she never saw him before, but she remember her parents talking about a men that forced her dad to build a super advanced weapon for the Axium Empire that he denied. Even before she could answer the men graph her body from the ground and said ‘ Talk or die its your choice” Aurelia looked in the men his eyes and there came a smile on your face. She said “ I can see it in your eyes, I can see it that you are scared, and you know I won’t tell you. The men was getting angry grapth a knife and stabt it in Aurelia her shoulder, he walked 2 steps behind. Aurelia was screaming out pain, she was hanging on the wall with a knife in her shoulder, after a few seconds her shoulder gave up, the weight was to much and the knife to sharp, Aurelia was fading away she lost to much blood. She refused to die and said one last thing to the 3 killers “You are to late, she is gone”. Even before Aurelia could give her last breath the men who pushed the knife in her shoulder and hanged her on the wall kicked her face and broke her neck. Arya heard everything and was scared, The 3 men left the house and closed the door. Arya was stood up and saw the body of her sister on the floor in blood she felt on her knees shaking her head side ways and wondering why. Suddenly! The silence was broken together with some windows when balls where trowed in the house,4 windows away from Arya 1 ball exploded. She took it for a run to the basement. She hide behind big boxes lay her head on the ground and closet her eyes, waiting for the explosions to finish...

Senvae · 04-01-2008, 09:43 AM

I still think you need to separate the text into 2 paragraphs, lol.

PS: Got tired of GZR's constant deletions huh?

Sukoshi · 04-01-2008, 06:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Senvae

I still think you need to separate the text into 2 paragraphs, lol.

PS: Got tired of GZR's constant deletions huh?

hehe ill do that i forgot xD

Well just screw gunz revolution and screw Diamons he is a ego kid of 14 year old who cant accept other people there opinions he banned me cause i was arguing isn't that the reason why a forum is online to share opinions and argue? I deleted all my posts and the forum became empty
Diamons had no choice closing the forum
HE GOT SERVED!

Ps: I lolled at the reason why the forum was taken offline xD
Ill put it in my signature here

Senvae · 04-01-2008, 08:55 PM

LOL! Allow me to form a little signature title

All Hail Sukoshi, Destroyer of the Revolution!!

That's almost as bad ass as the Techno Viking...

Sukoshi · 04-02-2008, 05:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Senvae

LOL! Allow me to form a little signature title

All Hail Sukoshi, Destroyer of the Revolution!!

That's almost as bad ass as the Techno Viking...

hehe i like that xD
But actualy Diamons destroyed it himself but enough talking about the past xD

04-01-2008, 09:02 AM	#1 (permalink)
Sukoshi Gunzfactor Fan Writer Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 11	Arya: Road of Blood (Part1) Its my first fan fiction, sorry for bad english. This was supposed to be a gunz movie but i didn't feel like casting and stuff so i edited the script and made a fan fiction =) Arya: Road of Blood Created by Sukoshi The world was ripped a part and the clove between riche and poor became even bigger. The once who hold the money hold the power . Together those men formed a city called Axium and locked it from the world that once was called the most beautiful place in the galaxy, earth. Now its destroyed by the wars between Axium and Travia. Travia were the poor men, they were the only one who saw the real meaning of creating Axium… The war between the rules and the rebels was so heavy, the world payed the price and was left in ashes. Manny wars were battled, no matter how many proud and strong fighters Travia brought, the Axium weapons where to power full… However after Axium was build the true meaning of the project were clear to everyone inside but it was to late the big gates where locked and guards protecting them day and night, nobody would come in but nobody would leave Axium either. 12 Years later from the first war, Sawyer a professor that was forced to work for Axium in developing weapons to give the Axium soldiers more fire-power. Had picked up his life again and met Ziza, married her and they have 2 daughters, Aurelia and Arya. It was a normal school day Aurelia and Arya were learning, while Sawyer and Ziza were eating in the dinning room. Suddenly someone knocked the door. Ziza looked at Sawyer with a terrifying look, stood up and went to the door. Sawyer was still sitting at table he was shaking and scared. When Ziza opened the door there was the sound of a voice saying “times up” and then a loud but deadly gun shot. Sawyer stood up took a table knife and runned to the door. Just when he turned around the corner he severed the same faith as his wife. Two life’s taken but for what reason? A third person joined the other 2 and said “Nice work, men. Get the kid and bring her to me. Aurelia and Arya who heard the gun shots didn’t understand anything. Aurelia started running Arya was trying to keep up but she wasn’t fast enough, her sister was older. When Aurelia entered the hall the 2 men where already there, they shot Aurelia several times, she felt on her knees and turned her head to Arya who was some seconds behind, she said the word “Run” silence. Arya was in shock her legs couldn’t move, she was shocked and didn’t understand anything of what happened. After a couple of seconds she got back to the reality and actually runned behind a book closet with tears in her eyes but she know if she would cry the persons who killed her sister would come after her and they would kill her to. Aurelia wasn’t dead yet, the 2 men smashed her body against the wall and put a knife on her throat. A loud voice said “Wait, I know that you know why we are her so tell me were she is and maybe I let you be my little pet. Aurelia looked in the eyes of the men, she never saw him before, but she remember her parents talking about a men that forced her dad to build a super advanced weapon for the Axium Empire that he denied. Even before she could answer the men graph her body from the ground and said ‘ Talk or die its your choice” Aurelia looked in the men his eyes and there came a smile on your face. She said “ I can see it in your eyes, I can see it that you are scared, and you know I won’t tell you. The men was getting angry grapth a knife and stabt it in Aurelia her shoulder, he walked 2 steps behind. Aurelia was screaming out pain, she was hanging on the wall with a knife in her shoulder, after a few seconds her shoulder gave up, the weight was to much and the knife to sharp, Aurelia was fading away she lost to much blood. She refused to die and said one last thing to the 3 killers “You are to late, she is gone”. Even before Aurelia could give her last breath the men who pushed the knife in her shoulder and hanged her on the wall kicked her face and broke her neck. Arya heard everything and was scared, The 3 men left the house and closed the door. Arya was stood up and saw the body of her sister on the floor in blood she felt on her knees shaking her head side ways and wondering why. Suddenly! The silence was broken together with some windows when balls where trowed in the house,4 windows away from Arya 1 ball exploded. She took it for a run to the basement. She hide behind big boxes lay her head on the ground and closet her eyes, waiting for the explosions to finish...

04-01-2008, 09:43 AM	#2 (permalink)
Senvae Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Edmonton, Alberta Canada Posts: 404 Senvae's GamerBio	Re: Arya: Road of Blood (Part1) I still think you need to separate the text into 2 paragraphs, lol. PS: Got tired of GZR's constant deletions huh? __________________ Fan Fiction by Senvae THE FIERY LOTUS Part-1, Part-2, Part-3, Part-4, Part-5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8 (Final Chapter)

04-01-2008, 08:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
Senvae Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Edmonton, Alberta Canada Posts: 404 Senvae's GamerBio	Re: Arya: Road of Blood (Part1) LOL! Allow me to form a little signature title All Hail Sukoshi, Destroyer of the Revolution!! That's almost as bad ass as the Techno Viking... __________________ Fan Fiction by Senvae THE FIERY LOTUS Part-1, Part-2, Part-3, Part-4, Part-5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8 (Final Chapter)