"Callin the Shots" ~A Modern Fantasy

HellSyn · 03-30-2008, 11:16 PM

About myself:
Name: Steven or Huu (my shortened vietnamese name)
Age: 17

Aside from playing GunZ and etc., my main hobby is reading and writing. I do read alot of strange novels (Such as "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" and whatnot) and I write lots of philosophical poetry/writings.

I am currently writing two different novels, one called "Lendgard Chronicles" and the other "Callin the Shots". CoS is based on my real life personality and my gunz personality in one character. The story was inspired by a great many series such as Devil May Cry, Gungrave, and etc. and including the game GunZ itself.

So with that said, I think I can post this as a document. Its not finished, I'm writing everything on paper and having many people check this as I go before I place it in text. So dont expect quick and fast updates.

I do want people's honest opinions and strong critics so I can make myself a better writer.

A Sidenote: Chapter 2's name is changed to "The Broken Cycle", so dont mind its current title (not released yet anyway).

Becci · 03-31-2008, 09:32 AM

It's good so far. (: I'd like to read more.

HellSyn · 04-01-2008, 03:36 PM

Thx for the compliment :0

In the process of re-writing the second chapter. The first two versions (5-9 pages on binder paper) were crap to me as it didnt fit my theme for this. So this will take some time.

03-30-2008, 11:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
HellSyn Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: A den near you Posts: 306 HellSyn's GamerBio	"Callin the Shots" ~A Modern Fantasy About myself: Name: Steven or Huu (my shortened vietnamese name) Age: 17 Aside from playing GunZ and etc., my main hobby is reading and writing. I do read alot of strange novels (Such as "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" and whatnot) and I write lots of philosophical poetry/writings. I am currently writing two different novels, one called "Lendgard Chronicles" and the other "Callin the Shots". CoS is based on my real life personality and my gunz personality in one character. The story was inspired by a great many series such as Devil May Cry, Gungrave, and etc. and including the game GunZ itself. So with that said, I think I can post this as a document. Its not finished, I'm writing everything on paper and having many people check this as I go before I place it in text. So dont expect quick and fast updates. I do want people's honest opinions and strong critics so I can make myself a better writer. A Sidenote: Chapter 2's name is changed to "The Broken Cycle", so dont mind its current title (not released yet anyway). __________________ "Osht! EVERYONE LEAVE BEFORE HE EATS US!" ~Crusnik666, before HellSyn ate him. Screenshot Glitching Guide: http://www.gunzfactor.com/forums/f11...glitching.html http://gensyndal.blogspot.com <--- Short Stories made by me.

03-31-2008, 09:32 AM	#2 (permalink)
Becci Coin Operated Former Moderator Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Pluto Posts: 2,145	Re: "Callin the Shots" ~A Modern Fantasy It's good so far. (: I'd like to read more. __________________ People who are quite possibly cooler than you: kenny, sergei, angelo, aculard, king-banana, flupty, diego, richy کτγℓع says: I would bet that 80% of the guys on this forum no matter how weird or ****ed up are good in the sack

04-01-2008, 03:36 PM	#3 (permalink)
HellSyn Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: A den near you Posts: 306 HellSyn's GamerBio	Re: "Callin the Shots" ~A Modern Fantasy Thx for the compliment :0 In the process of re-writing the second chapter. The first two versions (5-9 pages on binder paper) were crap to me as it didnt fit my theme for this. So this will take some time. __________________ "Osht! EVERYONE LEAVE BEFORE HE EATS US!" ~Crusnik666, before HellSyn ate him. Screenshot Glitching Guide: http://www.gunzfactor.com/forums/f11...glitching.html http://gensyndal.blogspot.com <--- Short Stories made by me.