Beso Chocolate

Sigh · 02-16-2008, 02:13 AM

She catches me off guard and immediately presses her lips against mine. On her tongue there’s a faint scent of cream and milk, and as I pull back there’s nostalgic reminiscence of a former childhood addiction.

“You taste like chocolate.”

She presents a heart shaped box filled with them and presses it against my chest. I watch as she crosses her arms and closes her face onto mine, just about to open her mouth to speak.

“Well Happy Valentines Day then.” She says in a low whisper.

And I kiss her again.

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Wixern’s story just reminded me it was rose’s day; I felt the urge to contribute, sorry if I stole your idea. But don't worry, it's not as good as yours.

Wixern · 02-16-2008, 03:32 AM

I don't consider anything "stolen" about this. In fact, I like to see that more people spend some attention to special days. Keep up the good work.

Senvae · 02-16-2008, 09:30 AM

That one was quite short, lol. Sorry this one leaves me indifferent Sigh.

02-16-2008, 02:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
Sigh Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 1,767 Sigh's GamerBio	Beso Chocolate She catches me off guard and immediately presses her lips against mine. On her tongue there’s a faint scent of cream and milk, and as I pull back there’s nostalgic reminiscence of a former childhood addiction. “You taste like chocolate.” She presents a heart shaped box filled with them and presses it against my chest. I watch as she crosses her arms and closes her face onto mine, just about to open her mouth to speak. “Well Happy Valentines Day then.” She says in a low whisper. And I kiss her again. __________________________________________________ _______________ Wixern’s story just reminded me it was rose’s day; I felt the urge to contribute, sorry if I stole your idea. But don't worry, it's not as good as yours. __________________ Rawr!@!

02-16-2008, 03:32 AM	#2 (permalink)
Wixern Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: The Fan Fiction Section Posts: 936	Re: Beso Chocolate I don't consider anything "stolen" about this. In fact, I like to see that more people spend some attention to special days. Keep up the good work. __________________ Ijji Gunz: Wixern- level 50+ (Penguins) Revolver fanatic. TheRapist- level 50+ (Waffle) Revolver Lunatic.

02-16-2008, 09:30 AM	#3 (permalink)
Senvae Gunzfactorian Patriot Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Edmonton, Alberta Canada Posts: 404 Senvae's GamerBio	Re: Beso Chocolate That one was quite short, lol. Sorry this one leaves me indifferent Sigh. __________________ Fan Fiction by Senvae THE FIERY LOTUS Part-1, Part-2, Part-3, Part-4, Part-5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8 (Final Chapter)