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Old 11-11-2007, 07:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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What has a Dentist got to do with GunZ? A little story! Lol. Nah, it's nothing to do with the official GunZ story. This story is about a guy's encounter with the Dentist!

==The Dentist==

My tooth... oh my tooth... it hurts like mad! I wish I hadn't...

I clasped my hands on the right of my jaw, pressing hard, hoping to ease the pain as I walked into the dental clinic. The pain only grew stronger and stronger with each moment, the pressing only made it worse. I was warmly received by a Divine Hands nurse at the counter, as I could see from her pink outfit and neatly tied pair of ponytails.

"Please register your name." The nurse smiled as she handed over to me a piece of paper and a pen. Prying away one hand from my jaw, I glanced at the paper at an empty slot and held the pen. I quickly signed on it, unable to bear the pain.

"Thank you sir, here is your number, please take a seat."

I was handed over a ticket. I tried to smile at her, though I failed terribly. I got myself a bit more comfortable at my seat, as I looked at the current number, then my own.

01993

02007

Garr... looks like I have to wait quite a while. I groaned and moaned, as I recalled the past...

==The Past==
I was in a heated battle under a rain storm against a master swordsman. The swordsman was an Axium Gun Knight, and he was incredibly tough, as seen by his great packs of muscles and giant size. He held a lightning-enchanted golden dragon sword as well as a massive Avenger MK.II shotgun and a pair of shiny, silver Minic567 MK.II revolvers.

On the other hand, I was a Gunner's Heaven agent equipped with an ice-enchanted devil slayer sword, a Maxwell LX44 rifle and a Cruelizon shotgun.

Our swords clashed like thunder. Magical particles of the chilling ice elements and shocking electricity were seen flying and following the trail of our swords. In the middle of our sword fight, we would also switch to our guns and fire at each other, evading, blocking and shooting off each others' bullets.

At the end, our swords crossed in a deadlock. We challenged each others' strength as we pressed hard, so much that the elements on our swords charged and grew in a bright light. I could even feel it. I was about to lose to him in strength.

No, I could not let him win this! I released a little, and then made a sudden push. Completely taken aback by this move, the Gun Knight did not know how to react as his sword went flying into the air. I sheathed my sword on my back, and drew out my shotgun and placed my first finger on the trigger, ready to pull it.

Halfway through the shot, the Gun Knight launched his fist at my face! With such impact, I flew off to a distance, but not before I finished pulling the trigger, and the shotgun blasted him. Blood spurted out of his body, as the shotgun pellets pierced through him, killing him instantly. He fell to the ground, causing a minor tremor. There was silence on the fighting ground, except for the strong winds and powerful thunderstorm and the splatter of raindrops.

I crashed to the ground as well, sliding across the wet ground before I stopped on a pillar. I coughed and spat out a few mouthfuls of blood, and my jaw was sore. I thought I had cracked my jaw when I heard the "crack" during the punch. No, it was my tooth! It took me a while to realize that, as it did took me to get up and hurry home to prepare to see the Dentist.


==The Present==

"Number 02007, Mr Johnson?" a calm voice called.

I raised my head and glanced around in a shock. "What?"

"Please proceed here."

I got up from my seat with dread. I hated the dentists since I was young. Though they looked calm, friendly and innocent in their white robes, neatly combed hair and mask, the jagged knives hidden under their coats scared me, those Warlord's Gut Rippers. I followed the man. He seemed to be my dentist. Good, because he looked like he could do it without much pain and without using scary objects like those... gut rippers.

We walked down the bright hallway lit with yellowish lights, with doors shut at both sides. I could hear screaming and crying as I went further. I also noticed that some of the victims... or patients also looked terrified or in extreme pain as they went past and out of the hallway. I shuddered. This was just like a nightmare I had.

"This way sir." His arm showed me to a door, labelled 'Room 27'.

What? That man was not my dentist? Then who was? I squinted at the name tag below and tried to pronounce it.

"Doc-tor-Ph-eer..."

"Dr Pheer?!"

"FEAR?!"

I was horrified at what I saw, but I did not scream. I just knocked on the door and opened...

I could hear a sinister and evil voice, like one of a mad scientist.

"Welcome to my room. You are Mr Johnson, right?"

I swallowed once, and nodded, forgetting the pain on my jaw. My eyes were bulged.

"Well, hello. Don't worry, it will be fine!" Dr Pheer glared at me with those evil-looking red eyes. His eyebrows were pointing downwards, and they almost met.

He ushered me to the Dentist's chair, and I laid on it. I gulped as I saw the horrifying Warlord's Gut Ripper hanging around, blood stained on it.

"Alright, open wide~!"

I opened my mouth, and he bent down towards my mouth, beginning to inspect and prod around my mouth with his equipment. "Let's see... what seems to be the problem... Aha!"

He stood up, his eyes burning with the demonic look. "What do we have here? A tooth that has been bent and it must really hurt!"

He turned around, searching for his equipment. I imagined the horrors of him carrying the gut ripper, laughing maniacally with his eyes all glowing red, and started stabbing me with it.

Fortunately, he did none of that. Instead, he drew out a DRILL!!!

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!"

"That's very good, Mr Johnson. But don't worry, you won't feel a THING! Open your mouth and shout AHHHHHHH~!"

I could not shut my mouth, as he pried open my mouth wide and started drilling here and there and then took a pair of pliers. The pliers clammed on my tooth. With a mighty pull, the tooth was removed!

"It has been done!"

I got up, panting and sweating. I blinked, but I realized the pain was gone! Dr Pheer gave me a cup of water to rinse and spit.

"Thank you Doc! I knew you'd be of great help! The pain is gone now!"

I grabbed his hand, and shook it hard, and then I quickly rushed out and left the room, leaving the door to close on its own. I cheered and shouted as I sprinted down the hallway.

==Narrator==
Little did Johnson know, the Dentist, Dr Pheer was completely surprised and stunned that his patient had gotten well. His surprised expression turned into a frown and he burst into a rage.

"NO!!!!! HOW CAN THIS BE!!! IT WAS THE WRONG TOOTH!!! I'M SURE OF IT!!! WHY MUST IT BE THE CORRECT ONE THAT I PULLED OUT!!!"

Dr Pheer drew his trusty, blood-stained dagger out from where it stood. He opened his shelf and drew out a *Shattered Iron shotgun and a pair of Odd Guns and a Pressure RX rocket launcher.

"ALL WARRIORS WILL HAVE THEIR DENTAL APPOINTMENT WITH ME! AND I SHALL PULL OUT ALL THE WRONG TEETH AND MAKE THEM SUFFER EVEN MORE! THEN THEY CANNOT FIGHT, AND I WILL BE ABLE TO BEAT THEM ALL, TAKE THEIR POWERS AND BE THE NUMBER ONE OF ALL ASTRA!!!"


The Evil Dentist had his weapons ready, and he kicked open the door, his Warlord's Gut Ripper in his hand...

==The End==

*Shattered Iron is a new shotgun, quest gun. Check it in GunZ Entopy

EDIT:
Spelling Errors corrected.
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Old 11-11-2007, 08:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I, uh...

...What the hell?

Rather eccentric. I couldn't help but notice the spelling errors and "phonytails", though.
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Old 11-11-2007, 08:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I must have typed too fast XD

*sigh* I got bored, so I just typed... sorry if I'm a terrible storyteller

Alright, I'll edit for spelling errors later.
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Old 11-11-2007, 09:41 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Lol cool story
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Old 11-11-2007, 12:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
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rofl, nice story dude xD
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Old 11-11-2007, 02:18 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Those twin ponytails you speak of are commonly known as "Pigtails", and they make great handles for the climax of a great bl.... oh wait there are kids here.
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Old 11-11-2007, 04:38 PM   #7 (permalink)
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