A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron

guobin2 · 09-16-2007, 03:19 AM

A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron

Tis’ silent sweet surrender
That suffuses my soul with the slightest longing
Is but more than a fleeting phantasy no longer
The silver rivers of youthful love will have stopped a-calling

I have stood and stared upon the labyrinth of the young
The sharp twists and sudden turns of fickle contemplation
The myriad of floaty, monosyllabic replies
Intermingling with the drawn out, soulful cries

The delicious shivering forever barred to me
Icicles glistening unseen, unfelt in their blue vaults
Pleasure wrought but unwrought
A lustrous glow of twisted bronze dimmed and darkened

Golden cupids and heavenly angels
Have become lost to me
As has love.

A letter of fleeting love from one soldier to whom he has left behind. Just a short poem I came up with.

**Nosedagger** · 09-16-2007, 04:23 AM

I'll need a dictionary...

*adds to listings*

Sarcor · 09-17-2007, 05:01 PM

Any updates to your novel? Btw, nice poem, deep meanings and all that.

TeH_Reaper · 09-19-2007, 02:55 PM

g00d poem,
like it!

**Misu-Chan** · 09-20-2007, 07:04 AM

Nice work, excellent read.

**Experiment** · 10-26-2007, 11:13 PM

o.o hehe tht was good

xKoovin · 10-26-2007, 11:19 PM

sht that's pro. great work.

09-16-2007, 03:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
guobin2 Gunzfactorian Soldier Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Singapore Posts: 620	A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron Tis’ silent sweet surrender That suffuses my soul with the slightest longing Is but more than a fleeting phantasy no longer The silver rivers of youthful love will have stopped a-calling I have stood and stared upon the labyrinth of the young The sharp twists and sudden turns of fickle contemplation The myriad of floaty, monosyllabic replies Intermingling with the drawn out, soulful cries The delicious shivering forever barred to me Icicles glistening unseen, unfelt in their blue vaults Pleasure wrought but unwrought A lustrous glow of twisted bronze dimmed and darkened Golden cupids and heavenly angels Have become lost to me As has love. A letter of fleeting love from one soldier to whom he has left behind. Just a short poem I came up with. __________________

09-17-2007, 05:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
Sarcor Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Past the sea of Gumdrops Posts: 1,009 Sarcor's GamerBio	Re: A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron Any updates to your novel? Btw, nice poem, deep meanings and all that. __________________ Nagunz/IJJIgunz: HaxedSarcor [33] ßéßé [15] BACK IN ACTION P.S. +Rep anyone who likes Dragonforce. Remember 100+ posts +rep counts! Tired of begging for prems? Well why not make your own money!!---> http://adbux.org/?r=Sarcor

09-19-2007, 02:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
TeH_Reaper Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: RoflCopta-Pr0z0r Posts:0 Posts: 35 TeH_Reaper's GamerBio	Re: A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron g00d poem, like it! __________________ not active on NAserver

09-20-2007, 07:04 AM	#5 (permalink)
Misu-Chan 我爱你永世。 Golden Gunzfactorian Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: 天堂。 Posts: 5,539 Misu-Chan's GamerBio	Re: A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron Nice work, excellent read. __________________ Misuzu's Army \| in520 \| fzl-mx\| S.H.E \| Last FM

10-26-2007, 11:13 PM	#6 (permalink)
Experiment Bset since 1991~ Golden Gunzfactorian Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Australia. Posts: 299	Re: A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron o.o hehe tht was good __________________ JORDAN N TYLER ARE THE BEST <3!~

10-26-2007, 11:19 PM	#7 (permalink)
xKoovin Gunzfactorian Guardian Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,052 xKoovin's GamerBio	Re: A Letter found in a torn coat near Port Baron sht that's pro. great work.