Random girl with some premiums (first gunz fanart try)

[smily]

K lol here's my first try to draw a gunz fanart and female body drawing..
I wish some comments about the anatomy etc etc pls.
And i know it sux, this sort of comments u should throw in recycle bin.
The hat is from Eternal blue thingiez and others from Gun priestess colection.

[Shikihe]

maybe post the pic so we can give critic?

[SwordPlusGun]

For effort i would say 7.5/10 but i'd say 6/10 If you tried some shade work on the face i may i said 7/10

[Soliloquy_]

The character seems lonely. Maybe she isn't happy wearing a Pirate Suit. XD

*just messing up*

[mr_town]

6/10 not so good

[Chieko-Chan]

I like how you drew the eyes, maybe you can work on the body and clothes more. 6.9/10

[[Theo]Duality]

Omfg You Have The Talent!

[lordcarbo]

Work on anatomy. Since you don't know a thing about it, the first thing you'll want to focus on is proportions.

Go do a Google search on it or something. What do I look like, a teacher? zzz

[Andriusch]

very good. maybe try making her with a gunz or sword

[Escoda]

I like it.

[Eos]

Very good. 9/10

[Huopatossu]

Pretty decent picture. But as LordCarbo said, you may want to focus more on proportions. Good artwork + wrong proportions = horrible look.

I give it 6/10.

Keep practising, and you'll become really good artist.

[Rose]

make the eyes and the boobs bigger ;-)
Good job for the first try :-O 8/10

[Nayokia]

Not bad for first attempt, cloths are good, not a fan of the body... 5/10

[Shikihe]

head is too big for the body + it looks too wide. Other eye is bit bigger. The arms got something wrong going on. The boobs look like flat cuz theres no shades umm and yeah. Her hair cannot come outside the hat, u know wat I mean? Or is there holes in the hats sides. Neway, as carbo said, learn proportions.