[Paul]

Very nice, but you shouldn't have included so many fast-moving shots. Actual gameplay would have been nice, and I didn't like how much you pumped the contrast and color altering effects. I also see you've been using some AE tutorials, but I thought you should have altered those concepts a bit more to make a more original and unique 3-D plane for your text and whatnot. I also felt that your camera control on the cube and on the text could have used a bit of improving. There are a few issues with pixilation on some shots that you could have fixed, but they were hardly noticable. Still, it was good. I liked it.