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Don stopped in his place and turned and started to fire with all his power at the soldiers. One by one, they dropped but the last one got Don in the head. Don went crashing through the snow and the soldier just continued to chase me. I was at the trees finally but the red soldier was already aiming to make his shot. I had no choice but to take the dive again.
The soldier took his shot as I drove right into the darkness of the branches and he got me right on the foot. I was hit. It was over, I didn’t make it but I continued to run just as fast and pretended nothing happened. As I escaped the darkness I was at our base again but this time soldiers were waiting for me just outside our base. I was so close I could not lose this. I sprinted with all my energy left and attempted to dodge all their shots while at it and I took one last dive. Shots drove past my head and skimmed my face leaving little marks of where they had hit. Anxious to escape I took my sweaty hands and took the icy pool of the flag and struck it into the ground. Shots continued to echo through the background and everything was a blur. I was still being fired at and I was struck right in the face. Coldness rushed through my skull and I was down. Blackness filled my head and I could not feel, see, or hear anything. Everything in my mind had escaped from my world and I could not twitch my body any longer.
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Darkness became faces of worry and cheers started to break out. Blood was crawling over my face and the sunlight made the blood become a shimmering ribbon as it soaked into the snow. The icicle beside me had a glimmer of blood sketch the edges as it had struck me in the face. Cheers and laughter continued as I lay there awake but hurt. They were proud of me and I was proud of myself. I won the snowball fight for me and my team.


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